I do hope you end up writing a sequel. I have now read this story twice, it was just as good this time around!

Great drama. Believable characters and reactions.

Wow that escalated quickly!

Great, now i'm gonna read the sequel if you don't mind.

cool story

Sweet Story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story (update soon Plz)

That still requires a sequel even bigger than the original... :D

Please, please make a sequel! I love your story (and I'm a huge WenDip shipper) and I think it is your DUTY to continue this. I don't care who you pare Dipper with. (Please let it be Wendy).

LIKE I SAID BEFORE, before...bef, you get the point. It was a lovely story throughout, the only complaint was the F-word to me, that was the only thing I thought was out of line. Nothing incorrect I don't think though other than that. Obviously I ship WenDip like, super hardcore, probably to no avail but its just what I do now. Ive wanted them to be together since day one but got REALLY extreme with it a month ago now. I don't hate Pacifica, she isn't annoying NOW as she once was but Wendy just, its somehow miles a difference to me. Not the people, as I know they ARE on the other sides of the spectrum obviously but Wendy is from the start. That's what I see. I don't know if you have ever watched Frasier, the television show, [sorry for spoilers if you have not watched it and magically plan on it NOW] but in that show, the main characters brother [Niles] falls for his father's caretaker [Daphne] in the 2nd episode of the show. He never stops being in love with her and it actually takes 8 seasons but they finally realize they are meant for each other. It was a great feeling, that's how I see this. If I meant a girl like Wendy there's, no way, . I would stop caring for her either. Just, no way. Maybe that's why I care so much really, I take it personally more than anything probably. Oh well, WenDip FOREVER.

Great story again, thank you for writing it and hope you plan on more things like this!

9/10

Oh good grief now Im gonna start crying again dangit! CHAPTER 7 AWAY!

9/10

Yeah, same as before. Honestly was great. The only thing which, in most cases it PROBABLY would be the normal response to said actions BUT, I feel like Wendy wouldn't really condone an F-Word. Not to say she wouldn't swear but I mean, that's some seriousness right quick. It honestly caught me off guard. I personally don't swear, at all, [not like that matters smh] but it just seemed kind of off to me. I mean, tbh, I never said that word in my life but It's not like I never thought about saying it xD or thought it for that matter, so I can understand that. TO ME, PERSONALLY here, I would not see her saying OR thinking that. Not complaining, just my 2 cents. Loved the chapter still though.

8.5/10

Liked this one also. They haven't been able to honestly 100% pull away from each other, the next chapter being just as good if not close enough to the previous. Very well done nonetheless and have thus far really enjoyed it. More WenDip is what I need anyways! xD Even if it does come with controversy, that is A-OKAY with me!

9/10

Great chapter again, I honestly almost cried also xD [Quite, easy to get emotional for myself]

9/10

WenDip pls prevail...

lol Really liked this chapter too. Not as good as the first to me but still very enjoyable.

8.5/10

OOoooooo controversy, I LIKE IT!

9/10