Reviews for A Different Destiny |
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Guest chapter 7 . 1/11 Evil |
Limo chapter 10 . 10/18/2018 This was nice! |
Anna McNarin chapter 2 . 11/28/2017 Whoa, ok, firstly, spellcheck. It is your friend. Your characterizations isn't bad but at the speed you've set this tale everything is all a blur. If you ever come back to this, I would recommend slowing down and drawing out the scenes, it'll make transition easier and we'll get to know the characters better. |
MLN chapter 1 . 9/10/2017 Please continue this story |
kirsty21 chapter 10 . 10/8/2016 cool |
Stardancer0829 chapter 10 . 8/28/2016 please continue this story |
HH chapter 9 . 7/13/2016 Lol I just had Shwarma for lunch |
HH chapter 3 . 7/13/2016 Awwwwwww my feeeeeeeels! |
HH chapter 2 . 7/13/2016 Thank God I don't like Drarry |
Love2read23 chapter 10 . 4/14/2016 This is cute. Thanks for writing. I don't understand how a wand appeared in Paris' hand and patroni aren't really known for attacking anything except dementors. |
moonprincess97524 chapter 6 . 4/6/2016 okay this so doesn't make sence, In the first few chapters you had Tony getting along extremely well with Steve and the other Avengers, and now all this fighting? The first few make it sound like the Loki issue already happened for the group to be so friendly and yet what is going on? |
Nat-kun chapter 2 . 12/22/2015 Hello, The story seems great but I can't honestly say that I will continue it. Please, work on your spelling: it looks like you're writing by ear then using autocorrect. Of course, there are many reasons for why so many words are misspelled, but if you are non-English native, dyslexic, not great in orthography or anything, at least take/ask for a beta. Nat. |
GenkaiFan chapter 10 . 8/6/2015 You need to work on your spelling, other than that I enjoyed the story! The Frau, GenkaiFan's writing partner |
Anime Princess chapter 1 . 7/15/2015 One, Belletrix hurt and attacked the Longbottoms when Harry, Neville, and Draco are ALL under 2 years old. Two, Bellatrix hates anyone who ISN'T a pureblood wizard/witch...period. |
DragoKing999 chapter 10 . 7/12/2015 Great chapter dude |