Reviews for Natsu Dragneel the Dual Dragon Slayer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() why does it feel like the main protagonist is Lucy. I feel like all the important events are being shown through her eyes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmmm gray x and laki may work since they both use maker magic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent Chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this harem, and thankfully we will have Ultear in it I love Natsu and Ultear, and I hope that you will change your mind about Cana after the Tenrou events. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so what you're saying is... Jenny is an NTR or something? if she still end up with Hibiki then isn't she just a flings then? she won't even be in a harem |
![]() ![]() ![]() Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and it is good to see that the pandemic hasn't affected you much. Keep up the good work and stay safe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep it up I love this story please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() moooooooorrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee update moooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee dammmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiitttttttttt! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, well ... So Wendy is like Natsu now ... With Magic from Dragon-Slayer not only from Heaven, now also Poison? Wow ... It seems that it is stronger than before ... And perhaps he had not activated his Dragon Force? ... Hey and regarding the Harem ... I thought in the 1st chapters. You said I was ready but ... I'm not against you including Brandish but ... Because Erza's mother ... That wouldn't be weird? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not going to lie when I just got of work at 9 and I checked my notifications I saw you update this story after a long while and I completely freaked and was happy that this story was not forgotten. Other than that great work and keep it up I'm currently reading this and your Pokemon story, I'm actually going to start reading your other stories too after finishing the Pokemon story since I'm almost up to date with that one and this chapter now. Anyway Nova Draco out, peace y'all and stay safe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoaa back after a long time ooh but I still love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() why are you making this fanfic a copy of Canon with little to no changes in any events. natsu has the same strength as Canon EVEN THOUGH HE WAS TRAINED BY 2 DRAGONS. lisanna still "dies" laxus still beats the shit out of natsu even though natsu is a LIGHTNINH dragon slayer too and should take a lot less damage to his attacks look i not going to say the story is bad cause I actually like the idea of the story and was thinking that natsu would be an s class(let me explain... i thought his base from would be the same as caonon but that he would be able to use his fire lightning form to fight on par with laxus or erza and this was the weeks I thought you would make him...note I said par not beat) anyways since he is an s class he would go a harder missions and as such maybe he grew up a bit due to the missions making him grow up a bit... note I said a bit as in he would still be the same but now he at least understands somethings like love ... this way there can actually be some romance in the story and natsu would also be able to beat stronger enemies with his new power... enemies who in real life he would have no chance to beat like jellal , zero and maybe hades without the heart (and you give him another power up) but anyways this is what I was thinking going into this fanfic, a story with a stronger natsu who is smart enough to fall in love and doesn't need a shit ton of plot armor(or all that friendship power up bullshit they did in Canon that ruined the last arc for me) but instead you changed little to nothing and have girls falling in live with him. look i really like the idea of this fanfic but I'll probably drop it if this fanfic follows the canon story line the way it has... if I wanted to read the canon story I would just watch the anime or manga... i came here to read a cool fanfic with a nice twist to the story that casue actual change not the canon story with a little twist that does nothing to the actual events of the story...(plus natsu ends up have the ability to use lighting powers so as far as I can see all you did was and some back story to the canon and put it on fanfic) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wendy the Poison Sky Dragon Slayer…awesome. |