One slight problem with this prologue: if she was the widow of a marquis and not a fallen woman why didn't Darcy ask her to marry him years ago when she could have borne him a son?

It's good. I can't wait for more from you.

I am a publishing author who posts my stories first on FanFiction to get feedback as I write. The complete tag indicates the story is completed. Stories stay up for a few weeks after completion to allow starting readers to finish. After taking the story down, I leave a teaser that does not exceed the length of the Kindle sample. The prologue only comment indicates the story has been taken down. Once the story is published, I will indicate that in the summary. Cheers, Fred

This is marked complete?

Read this on Kindle before finding it here. Very real compared to many interpretations.

I have this on my Kindle and loved it!

Dear author,
I just read your complete story on-line and enjoyed it very much. Your stories have a running theme - Darcy is not perfect and nor immediately in love with Elizabeth. Always well researched with interesting little tidbits. But I love your characterizations! There is something about Lizzy that catches his notice and you always reveal at the end that Darcy was in love with Elizabeth earlier than he even knew. Your Lady Diana is not evil - I think she was a logical amour for Darcy when he was vulnerable and young. Of course, I enjoy the 28 year old virgin Darcy stories just as much as the next JAFF fan, but truly not very realistic. Most importantly, your Lizzys are strong and I prefer reading this much more than Darcys out to degrade Elizabeth. Mr. Bennet was the surprise for me even though you gave several hints throughout your story. I do think your story concluded a bit quickly and the miscarriage part glossed over but overall excellent story. Thank you for sharing.

Any timeline for when this will be published? Read it before and would like to read it again. It's been awhile since it was pulled down

I really loved this story! Read it when it was still fully up and eagerly waiting for it to be published!

When will this be published? Really interested in readingetting this!

I'm a follower of "the Lectrice" and am absolutely hooked. I just love your writing stile. So, I started here to see, what this story could be like. Love it so far. I saw, that there is only "Via Luton" on amazon and wanted to ask, if you are going to publish this story here, too. It would be great to have it on my kindle. Your storytelling is really excellent and you mentioned, that this would be one of the more complex stories of yours. That fact made me very curious.

I followed this for a bit. I never reviewed. And now it's pulled for publication. So here is a review. Reading this story was a bit like asking for a sandwich, getting nothing but bread. No meat. Get it? I ended up hating everyone! Is that what you were going for?

Very intriguing,
where can we find product?

So where do we findthe finished product?
I'm all atwitter to find put what happens next!

Please continue I can't imagine how Lizzie would ever want this Mr. Darcy!