this was so good I loved it from start to finish

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Extremely creative! The finale looks very intense. Can't wait :)

I too am suffering A LOT of nerves and worry over what may be in store for us (and Emma and Killian!) in the finale, though I enjoyed this very much as a possible take on it. It was too bad that just when she and Killian were enjoying and happy, quiet moment everything went to pieces. I loved that Emma really took on her hero mantle here, that Regina was willing to sacrifice as well, but Killian's reaction to what he knew Emma would ultimately do just broke my heart!

The six months later bit was inspired! (And not just because I want the show to go to Camelot so desperately, though that certainly didn't hurt!) First, to see Emma so sad and lonely and having again resigned herself to being forever alone, but then the wonderful happy ending twist! I loved imagining Killian as her brave knight searching for her - and that Emma has finally reached a place where she longs for him to find her (that really shows how far she has come!) The poignancy of her whispering to the little one she carries, "Someday baby, someday we'll get our happy ending back," just really spoke to me. It made sense that she would be grateful she had that last bit of Killian to cling to

When Emma opened the door and Killian was standing there...Wow! You captured the awe and exultation of that moment so well! I loved the way you had them echo Snowing with the "You found me..." and "Did you ever doubt I would?" They way that they just clung to each other was perfect after they had been separated for so long.

It really worked as a way for you to work out her taking on the Dark Curse but not turning evil. I can only hope something this rewarding will really happen on the show! Thanks SO much for sharing this! I absolutely LOVED reading it, from start to finish. One of my new very favorites! :)

Love this, even when we think Emma's become the dark you gave us hope with the baby. Then you have Killian showing up, with the dagger and that twist. In order to give a happy ending.

This has to be the best case scenario for the finale spoilers. I love it and hope this is how it goes!

Excellent!

This.
This was perfect.

No matter how the series goes (which I imagine is going to leave me in absolute turmoil for months after the finale until it starts back up again) - this is how I am going to imagine it goes.
Perfect job!

This is bloody amazing. Loved it. And where did you find these spoilers? I litterally can't find any :( I really loved this! Great job :)

One of the best stores I've ever read.
I hope some thing like this happens :)
I've heard that Camolot is going to be in an episode. :D
But i could be wrong :(

Lovely story

Aww very nice! Very realistic based on all the spoilers we have been getting this past week! Loved it!

wow! beautiful :) I am not looking forward to that finale I think I may die of a broken heart :( I hope it happens something like this though!

Ok this makes me feel SOOO much better with all the spoilers and stuff i've been reading about it. It was really stressing me out and upsetting me. But this was sweet and good. :)