Oh, good chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one! :)

You've got all sorts of complications going on here. It's delicious!

Oh, nice and intense right from the start. I'm looking forward to more! :)

Oh my goodness, you have got to continue this. Please!

Holy freaking crap...this...is...AMAZING. SO AMAZING.
I can't even...Your details, your words, your descriptions, your characterizations, your big brother protectiveness showing in the story, Roy's concern for Ed and ...AND THE TEAM IS THERE TOO?! THIS IS LIKE LITERALLY THE STORY OF MY DREAMS! NO JOKE.
I can't wait to see where you go with this! It's already so enjoyable and awesome but jeez...I'm not joking when I say it's the story of my dreams. It has everything I love :) The team, RoyEd, Protective Ed, Hurt Ed, Hurt Al, Protective Roy. Omg 3 I love you so much! Please continue and keep up the amazing work:)))!