Reviews for Rise Up
Bl00dyR0s3 chapter 1 . 4/14
when will u update it's a really good story
Misrel chapter 1 . 4/9
It took me time to realized the changes in this chapter. Even though this is a fiction about Haruhi and Honey, I thought it more logical when you made her call Kyoya instead of Honey. Yes the Haninozuka family train all the military forces, but Kyoya is the one always on the phone about everything. Just my opinion.
jesipenny chapter 13 . 8/2/2019
I love the drama and angst. The development between Hani and Haruhi is moving along at a realistic pace and I appreciate that. Please continue this story! It’s almost cruel to leave it as it is!
TomParisLvr chapter 1 . 11/25/2018
Thank you for writing this story
Damaged Forest Spirit chapter 13 . 11/20/2018
I love this story so so so much. I hope you haven't given up on it. I would love to read more. Hopefully I can soon.
Misrel chapter 2 . 8/15/2018
While I understand why you made Haruhi call Hani instead of Kyoya, the later was a more logical choice. Even if the Haninosuka control the police forces and the army, it is Kyoya's family that controls hospitals. So I understand you change who she called because of the romance with him, but I don't think it would have been necessary since Kyoya was still a logical choice to get out of there.
afraidofspiders chapter 13 . 7/28/2018
I so hope you update this story I love it and I understand if you've probably given up but I really hope you come back to this story
VenusWulf chapter 13 . 6/20/2018
This is incredible in many ways. All the build up. The relationship development. The growth and conflict the group is going through. Everything. Even the way Haruhi is dealing with her situation.
PrincessHaleyEve chapter 13 . 2/19/2018
I love the story! And I can't wait for the next chapter :D
Caysun chapter 13 . 2/1/2018
I like the updated last chapter. It does feel more real than the other version. Will you be taking us all the way into a bright future with these two? I would hope that they have multiple offspring that intermarry with the other hosts families so the commoner could bring some "common" sense to the future generations. If not I would love for her in her knowledge of her boys to find them good mates along the way. Anyway you shake it I think fiction should always end with a golden glow. Even as it may pass through the darkest shadows.
Princess Falling Star chapter 13 . 1/7/2018
I am in love with this, the characterization of Honey is perfect.
Insomniac Tiger chapter 13 . 11/28/2017
I am really impressed that you actually took the time to go back and revise your story! Shows really commitment to your work! I like the title change too!
Insomniac Tiger chapter 14 . 11/4/2017
I love where this is going! Can't wait for the next part! Hope you recover well from the hurricane.
Monica chapter 1 . 10/15/2017
I enjoyed reading this fif, I do not usually enjoy haruhi/ha I pairings but I think that this fix has been well done. I would love to see more chapters where she is interacting with all of some of the other members just because I want to see them all heal from what happened. Also I am interested to see more of what is happening in the school. I hope that you are recovering from the hurricane well. I will look for more chapters in the future!
Bard of Innail chapter 14 . 10/6/2017
I really can't wait to see this story continued. I love it!
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