Did you really kill gojyo in the first chapter?! O.O
What the hell? XDDD

Waa! I cried, really! There were tears!, when Gojyo was dying. I felt everything just as you were describing it. Hakkai's anguish, and the part where Sanzo finally held Goku and rested his head on Goku's shoulder. Wow. It was awesome. Waaaa! Poor Gojyo! He has been through so much and now he and Hakkai have confessed their love! So sweet! So good for both of them. They are so right together! And a horrible cliff hanger! Nooooo! Please please please finish the story! I know it has been a long time but I have to know how it ends!

well... thats bad...
never thought that the story would be that... complicated...? I mean it isnt at all, but at the same time... I just dont know...
dont get me wrong! I really like the story. its like I feel everything they feel. I live trough this mess just like they do! and it unnerves me to no end!
please continue as soon as possible!

you really killed him?! how could you!
thought they would just knock him out and take the blood they needed after all!
please tell me that hakkai is able to safe him! I dont like that at all!

Is there any chance that this story will continue. I really like it.

I REALLY wish you would update this. It's been forever. I wanna know what happens.

I really hope to see more of this one, because it's a beautiful fiction, and it's one of the worst cases of cliffhangers that I've ever read XD

Soooo..whats good w/ the completion of this story cuz to be real w/ you..i cried,laughed, cursed from reading this beautiful story and now im angry as hell. IT'S BEEN 6 YEARS DUDE! *sanzo voice* UPDATE ALREADY!

After so many years, I'm coming back to re-read some of my favorite stories and find that you have updated several chapters! Sorry, for not noticing. The story is still amazing and you capture the readers interest so well. Your OCs are some of the most believable OCs I've encountered in fanfictions. Hakkai's and Gojyou's reactions are realistic. Overall an amazing story. Maybe you could come back to the fandom and finish the story? Even if you don't, I've enjoyed it a lot.

It's amazing. Kind of cliche, but that's always good. Is there going to be anymore chapters? So far, all of your stories are great. I have no real issues with them I suppose. Just errors. But, they're OK to read around.

Oh god. I almost cried. This is such a good story.3

You want to know the best part of this fic? 2 Chapters in and I was near tears. You have an amazing gift... . Stop writing.

no! why haven't you updated yet? you have to update please! i'm begging you! whahahaha

Your writing is getting better with each chapter. There are fewer spelling and grammatical errors.

It's funny that I was just thinking there are lots of Hakkai-dies-and-Gojyo-loses-it fics and shouldn't there be more Gojyo-dies-and-Hakkai-loses-it fics and then I find your story. I do wish you would revise this story, especially the dialog. There are times when it is odd and seem unnatural. Remember that the way characters speak says a lot about their personalities, and you need to keep that in mind when you write dialog.