For your first story it was very good. The sad parts Sirius death ( not told) and Remus Death no Tonks were the only disappointments.

hermione thinks she should always be the smartest 1 .

powerful time traveler my favorite

it has also been said goblins invented fyi

well this will be epic i see

yeah this just didnt sit with me, i mean the whole house system is lackluster, and harry seems to be pussy just like cannon, having him give away part of his inheritance to people who dont deserve it really irks me

Aw, I was hoping Remus would live this time.

Interesting, enjoyable story. Thanks for sharing.

I almost expected Peter to die when Tom left him. Interesting variation on the final confrontation.

What a coup for Dobby. Dumbledore never learns. I guess it is a clear case of you can’t teach an old dog new tricks.

Pleasantly surprised at Ron’s more accepting attitude.

Too bad none are willing to listen or respect him. He has changed and matured and, unfortunately, very few are able to see that.

So glad to see Harry standing up to Dumbledore. I do hope that Dumbledore will actually tryand help keep people safe and not just use and manipulate them.

Weird to see Harry supporting the Ministry, but I understand his reasoning.

I don’t disagree with you about Hermione. Sounds like Harry is channeling his inner Slytherin.