... wow. Did I majorly misinterpret things or was Ratchet super callous regarding Prowl’s concerns & wishes? Because if he got to being anymore of an obstinate grouch about it I’d have full on considered him an antagonist.

Ahhh, this was such a sweet read . I love Ratchet's personality in this. That medic is just his best when he's his grumpiest. You had a lot of great emotional tension as well between Jazz and Prowl. Those first chapters before we get into why Prowl is the way he is are kinda tear-jerky. And I love this last chapter where we get to see a peek at Jazz's demons. I'm always a huge fan of the angsty Jazz hiding behind a smile. Wonderful job, keep writing!

This chapter was really good. I love your writing!
I hope you get well soon, take care of yourself. Anyone who trolls you is a lying piece of scum.
Thanks for updating!

There's a sequel to this?! Well I'm excited!

Just finished reading all of your nice, long chapters. You are seriously good! Like, this should be a book! I love what you have done with Prowl and Jazz, and want very much to read a sequel! I can tell you really put a lot of thought into your writing, and the results are excellent.

This is incredibly cerebral-it made me sad and angry and then just happy :) Please do more!

Get well soon! I know the frustration when you really want to get something done but physically can't. Great ending. You have the best explanation of why they are a perfect couple. Looking forward to the sequel but work on feeling better.
CC

Get well soon! I was thrilled to see an update and it was a great one! The end of this chapter was so touching, it brought tears to my eyes. I look forward to reading more when you are feeling better.

aww the feels!
I cant wait to see what excuse Prowl will offer Ratchet for his pre recharge readings. :) Especially considering they will come up again. He'd best be honest no doubt Ratchet would find out anyway and considering what happened because he kept secrets before...It would be amusing either way and you'll make it great.
an understanding compassionate Red Alert? wow. proof anyone can change given the right circumstances.
I loved seeing Prowl be real with Jazz and the trust thing. The dialog between them was great.
Awesome job as always.
CC

It almost made me cry at the end.

YEEESS! Beautifully sweet believable without being all smutty.

Just pondering about how to meet both needs while in a berth

"Are we recharging' or are we 'recharging'" :)

Great chapter and well worth the wait.
CC

Prowl has a lot to learn about his emotions, but at least he can feel them now! The filters seem to be the perfect solution for fixing Prowl without changing him and he's already wanting to lower them slightly without being forced into it! Maybe Jazz will help Prowl learn to recognize certain emotions when they finally get some time together.

Another great chapter. I love Blue and Smokey's idea of punishments. And Sides...poor Prowl :) I can't wait for the next chapter with Jazz and Prowl. I like the he literal warm feelings hr gets around Jazz! I am such a sucker for those two. Anyway great job as always.
ConChick

OH MY GOOOOD! I am SOOOOO excited! I can't wait for the next chapter! You are AWESOME! So far, you've made NO mistakes (that I saw, anyways)! I hope you finish soon :D yoooou'rrrree GREAT!

LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I can't wait for the next to see what happened to prowl and the implications of it on the autobots!
Thanks for posting!