Working my way threw all the stories again really like how you write Dean and Eliot

I thought you did great with Dean's POV. Loved this one as well.

WRITE MORE OF THESE PLEASE I LOVE THEM

This is the first non shippy Eliot and dean I've found
I love the friendship between Eliot and dean
Two men who has been though hell ( one literally)
Hope it stays non shippy

Now I will to back and read them in order

I read you little series in one sitting and LOVE IT.

Wonderful! I can't wait for the next installment.
Perhaps Parker and Hardison will be able to help Dean like they helped Eliot. At the same time, not to belittle Eliot's history because there's so much unknown terror there, I don't think anyone other than Sam or Cas, preferably both, would be able to do much for Dean. He/They have just been through so much, saw, lost, and suffer so much, literally been to hell and back.
Driven by absolute despair as hopelessness, your tone conveys the emotions so well.
I don't think the style and direction of your fic will allow for it, but it'd be fascinating and fun to see Dean work a con with the Leverage team. He's shown he can grift. Maybe run a con while Dean is hunting and they have to work together?
I'm excited for the next part!

These are all just lovely. Please tell me that there will be more soon.

Lee

This is the best series I've read in ages. I really enjoy how true you've written them, especially the silent interactions between Dean and Eliot. Please keep writing more, you're one of the reasons I keep checking back to this site.

Love it!

I've enjoyed this whole series you've done, even though I'm a big Sam fan. I liked Leverage so I like the two shows merging together.

I don't know if you wanted or needed any ideas for this series, but I think it would be neat to have a multi-chapter story where Dean goes missing and Charlie goes to the Leverage Team and they work together to find him. It could be that Charlie and Dean have this agreement that they talk at least once a week and if he does a job he either calls or texts her before and after just so she knows he's still alive. But this time, Charlie hadn't heard from Dean in "X" amount of time and she can't seem to locate him.

You're doing good. Can't wait to read the next one(s).

I like your work, it could be improved. I don't like the sentence Dean hates May. I sounds like he hates a woman. Better to say Dean hates the month of May-yes, even if you clarified the statement in the next sentence. You might want to watch your spelling, tenses and punctuation.
The subject itself is grim but with some lightening near the end. I do notice a certain detachment to the characters, they tend to tell themselves things but you don't tell us how they feel. On TV we don't need to be told how a character feels because we can see it but when we READ about a character we have to have someone tell us how they feel, how they look. When Dean cries on TV I cry with him (Jensen Ackles is just that great of an actor) and when I read about him being sad I want to be able to feel for him but I can't feel his sadness, his pain. Sorry

Awesome! You are one of the few authors that write good crossovers.

This was just exactly right.

This was a great addition to the verse! I love the look into Dean who really wants to give up but won't let himself and Eliot understanding. I'm hoping the next part has an explanation to Eliot (however cursory) for why he left so suddenly. Please update soon!

Wonderful. Dean would make a great addition to Leverage, if that's where you are going. I'll be along for the ride either way.