Reviews for The Tale of the Formerly Respectable Hobbit |
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K chapter 5 . 7/17/2018 Loved it! |
Alianna15 chapter 5 . 3/22/2016 great story! |
johnsarmylady chapter 5 . 10/18/2015 That was absolutely wonderful - poor heartbroken Bilbo made me cry, but the happy ending? Just perfect! |
johnsarmylady chapter 1 . 10/18/2015 Brilliant start - onwards... |
mariita1mari chapter 5 . 9/20/2015 Oh how I enjoyed this story it was just great and very entertaining. |
claire1663 chapter 5 . 9/10/2015 Hello, thank you for your fic All the best sincerly claire1663 |
zentry chapter 5 . 6/13/2015 liked your story soooo much! |
EarendilElwing chapter 5 . 5/19/2015 I loved this story! Thank you so much for sharing! I especially like that Bilbo takes the initiative in a lot of ways. Great job! |
Transformers' BABY chapter 5 . 5/8/2015 Awesome chapter |
ShadowTomes chapter 4 . 5/6/2015 Woot. Awesome. I look forward to the next chapter. |
Purrrin chapter 4 . 5/5/2015 This chapter is so wonderful! I absolutely loved the moment when Bilbo finally spills the beans and asks Thorin if he wants it to be more than friendship between them! It's so cool how you portray Bilbo, patient and lenient, but also determined and stubborn. Also my favorite line ever, Bilbo's "I thought I could reach for the sky and it would reach back, but it didn't"... Ahh, so bittersweet! Love how the other dwarves are so supportive of Bilbo and try to nudge him in the right direction, especially Kili and Fili. You just manage to get the right belance between funny and heartwarming scenes (and who doesn't love a nice round of let's topple the Hobbit over!) Can't wait for more :) |
Transformers' BABY chapter 4 . 5/2/2015 Please update story is awesome |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/30/2015 more now please |
Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 4 . 4/30/2015 (Psst, you said Fili twice in the very beginning. When talking about what he'd do for his family, "Fili and Thorin needing him blah blah blah." Of course, that's assuming you meant Kili and weren't going back to Bilbo's pov.) Ah, Thorin has some 'splainin' to do! XD I think he might just be scared. He's lost so many good things in his life: his family, his home, his MIND... He might be afraid that he'd lost Bilbo too, somehow and someway. Or I could just be making shit up to excuse the fact that Thorin is being a complete moron. XDD Update soon! |
SiriusBlackFan2 chapter 4 . 4/30/2015 He NEEDS to be confrontational! He needs to stand up, don't beat around the bush and declare his intentions to court Thorin! AND don't take "no" for an answer! |