Another chapter would be nice if it shows Mikey coping with his grief, maybe even finding peace. A sad but good story...

Oh this is cruel and sad and terrible. That's what you were going for, right? Writing a thing that would hurt people to read? Congratulations, for a job well done.

Oh wow. This is sad.

Poor boys! And Mikey, poor thing! It must be horrible to witness your siblings dead one by one.

April is so caring towards Mikey by letting him know that he will never be alone. He needs of the love and support because he lost his entire family.

*I want to hug Mikey*

This is the fuel I need to not give up on my own babies. I beg you for more, please.

Dangit woman! How can thaf be the only chapter! I gotta find out what happens next and again you killed them all! In a one-shot chapter that was literally a one-shot haha my gosh!

This was soo sad *takes the offered tissue* my gosh poor Mikey the whole time I thought it was Donny.

I have to find out! I know you got like a million and one stories but you cant stop this one!

I think the fic is okay as is. It's meant to be devastating, and that's already achieved. Even being with April, it somehow magnifies the tragedy more, since she isn't in nearly the same situation Mikey is. Everyone died believably, and no plot holes that I can find. A good effort.