I really enjoyed this book and I would love it if you would continue and no sorry I don't have any ideas for you sorry

It was great and no you shouldn't change anything

it was great

it was great and please continue to write this book

it was great and yes you should continue

no mistakes and it was great

it was great and there was nothing wrong with it either

you spelt 'entertain' wrong both times but other than that it was great

Wow, I like the brief plot this has and I can tell you now it has a lot of potential to turn out great if it gets completed! Yes, there are a few mistakes here and there as well as some grammar errors but nobody's a perfect writer (not even professional published ones, they have editors so you don't notice but sometimes things slip through the system). I've been writing for around 3 to 4 year now of fanfiction, and I promise, the more you write and the more you read, then the better you will become! Trust me, I started out as kind of a crap writer too, but now later down the line I'm proud to say I have definitely improved but I'm not perfect, I know that much - I still make a few mistakes here and there in my own writing. Honestly, just keep writing if you want to improve, it'll help you so much and who knows? It might even become something of a passion and make you want to work on an original piece of writing if you haven't already thought of that :)

I'm completely in love with cielois (Ciel x Alois) so this really appealed to me. I like your style of writing and your ability to add subtle suspense into fluff is impressive. Overall, I really like the plot of this story, and think you should continue writing it! :)

omfg ciel is gonna kill alios before this is over i know it

Famn girl UR popular Mabye u can give my currently poor story some street cred

I am personally not a Ciel x Alois shipper, but I like where this is going so far.

Update faster, Alois!