Hey, I hope you update this story I really love it good luck and great work

please update! lol I want to see (read) zeref's gave when he can't even fathom how strong natsu is!

This was a great story. Absolutely love it. Any chance for an update? I know it’s on hiatus, but just wondering.

The writing isn’t very describtive, in fact it reminds me of summaries. It’s very compact and doesn’t really give us an image of the scene, it only state what is happening. That’s something you should work on. Also at the parts repeating the events that already happened in canon feel a bit excessive, seeing that we already know what happened. The story would probably flow better if it focused on the changes you made to the plot. You could also make it so that it follows certain people and focus on their actions and reactions to what is happening. In this case, it would make sense to follow Natsu. You could change how the events to be different than in canon too, or else it will get boring quickly. Exploring the consequences to Natsu being at different times at different places and doing different stuff is, in my opinion an interesting direction the story can go. But ultimately you can decide what to write and that was just my opinion

Wendy is 415/416 years old. Really want to see how you "E,N,D" this story.

Please update story and add new character I like this story and I will like more if story continues on so please continue story

Pls make more

come on this is epic carry on thumbs up

Please come back and update the story!

I really hope you continue this fabric it is Amazing!

I really enjoyed the idea behind this story. I always like stories where Natsu joins Crime Sorciere and actually uses his brain. But there are a couple of things I would have personally changed. I really would have liked this to be a Natsu x Meredy story because that is one of my favorite ships and it makes sense in this story. I also would have changed how the tartaros arc goes because I find it hard to believe that Silver’s ice would have actually been able to keep Natsu frozen. I would have had Natsu show up towards the end and fight Mard Geer but otherwise not really be involved because he would be with his guildmates and Oracion Seis. Finally I don’t think he would
be stupid enough to try and attack Acnologia after he killed Igneel, I would have had him go back to Crime Sorciere and take a year to train like in canon. But these are just my personal opinions and it is your story but either way this story is really good.

This is beautiful.

Upon reading the reviews, I'm disgusted to see they think this is amazing. A poor man's rehash of Fairy Tail... fucking hell. If we just had what was actually unique about the story, it may be 20-50k, not 150k. Most of this is just summarizing each arc with minimal differences. Any "differences" are just to showcase Natsu being a big tough guy. I gave this story a chance, and it was extremely disappointing. See ya.

This is... honestly a kind of boring read. Most of it is just canon Fairy Tail with a few differences. It has taken me about half an hour to read everything that's actually different. If you cut out all the filler of recounting the canon events, and just focused on this being an actually different story, it could be amazing.

alas, this just feels uninspired. Or perhaps your just uninterested.

Ewww why did you have natsu and lamy kiss? That’s the most disgusting thing ever