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Heh, pretty cool. By the way, Shuu is a fox, not a dog, just letting you know. This is a pretty cool story, hope you 2 will update soon!

Oh this story is so good please continue it please!

it's very well written when it comes to grammer and sentence structure,etc, but it's boring as heck. sorry.

That idiot Pilaf kidnapped Piccolo? Oh well, his funeral. Hurry with the next chapter!

Since you haven't seen much of Pilaf, I thought I'd say that in the Piccolo Daimao saga (DB), he and his two cronies actually 'worked' with Daimao (they released the demon and wanted him to do their bidding, and it ended up the other way around). He's actually quite acquainted with Daimao. But for the purposes of this story, your telling works.

And the plot thickens, again. Just when you think things can't get any worse, they do, and you're left wondering how on Earth they're going to be resolved. Nicely done, by the way. I hope Goku and the rest find out what's going on!

Oh, I just luv that little Piccolo! I hope he'll get to keep the happiness he had as a temporary child when he is changed back into an adult. I found the interaction between Chi-Chi and Goku, and also the scene with Krillin, to be amusing. Chi sure is a feisty one.

You two make a great team! This story is developing wonderfully! Each chapter is strong and well-connected. Despite some minor variations, I can hardly tell between the two of your writing styles-which is good because this means the story generally remains consistent.

*Claps hands* Well, done, well done. I'm completely taken by chibi Piccolo! I think you are developing his personality well by balancing his innocence with his gradually growing awareness of his powers.

This is the cutest story! I'm enjoying the humour as well. Chi-Chi's obsession with Gohan's studies-and now Piccolo's!-is too funny.

This story is so wonderful! You are a great storyteller. I feel like I'm reading a magical fountain of youth or Never-Never Land fantasy.
I'm enjoying the pleasant interactions between Chi-Chi, Goku, Krillin, Gohan and kid Piccolo. They seem to be starting something of a family with the 'new' Piccolo.

I almost got teary-eyed! What a touching wish Gohan made! Little Piccolo is so adorable!
Your writing is solid-I'm finding the story very easy to read.

Poor Chi Chi. She will soon have gray hair by all of her worrying.
Don't ya think?

I hope Gohan and Goku find him soon. What caused Piccolo to collapse? Hurry with the next chapter!

Great chapter! Can't wait for next chapter!