It's a good story but honestly you inserting that godly OC of yourself just for the soul purpose of killing them at the end really really pissed me off and honestly made me hate the story.

This is hands down the most well written Natsu x Mira story out at the moment! Both, grammatically and creatively! Hands down! I'm not having to get six chapters in to finally break and decide I don't love the pairing enough to suffer with having to consistently change someone's writing (grammatical errors) as I read them just to get my NaMi fix. Is there some improvement that could be made to take your writing from satisfying to top notch? Sure! But, as you second story on the site, you perfectly nailed it and give me hope that others will be able to bring such life to not only their writing, but this awesome pairing as well! Just to clarify, that isn't a back handed comment, I just personally believe you have the capacity to become better than you already are if you go into more detail at certain points and time, truly take us into the mind of the character you're portraying as their going through something that we would consider life changing. But, I digress. You have hands down restored my faith in the writers to come for this pairing and Fairy Tail in general as I often struggle to find well written stories for one of my favorite story lines. I can't wait to read what comes next in your continuation of the story that I already saw posted on your account. But, I couldn't just greedily hop into the next one without giving you the praise you worked hard to so rightly deserve. 10/10 would read again from start to finish! Top job man!

I just wanna point out NO one in has a signature, trademark, or iconic smile, grin, or smirk!

This was an interesting story. I'm not a big fan of the ending, but otherwise, this was a fun read. Keep writing.

The reporters name is Jason, not James.

Love this story. The best NaMi fic I've read so far.

more? plz

should natsu be more childish caus iwnt he like still early teens?

HAHAHHA Jason is such a troll.

Your writing near the beginning of the story felt rushed and forced. As the chapters progressed, you got a lot better at writing and plot progression. Unfortunately, this last chapter felt forced as well.

My advice is to take your time, build the scenes, develop the characters in a natural way like you did in the second half of this story and i know your sequel will be a hit.

yes to Lemons

Lemons

Lemons.

Thank you for this fic, I didn't like this ending for obvious reasons, but I'm more than ready for the new start.

Lemons ornnot, do whatever you like. I like them, but if you aren't prepared for them just don't do it.

Have a safe trip and enjoy the following weeks :)

I kinda wish you hadn't ended it like this I want more -.- and lemons are ok with me