this story is so awesome, i hope you update soon
it has so much potential

This is great.

From a normal ride back home till it suddenly goes downhill, the thrill, the way you perfectly nailed down the trio's eccentric yet amazing relationship makes this adventure fanfic one heck of a ride. Ton of fun.

Really really love this, now I really would wish Pacifica would join the gang in future Mystery Adventures.

I like this, though I think Mabel is a BIT too casual about bleeding

Where can i read the following chapters !? This story is great ! Your stories are great ! They are well wrote and the use of the fantasticals creatures is very well done.
Thanks a lot for the story ! :)

Well, that was insane. I usually don't like reading about the future adventures of the Pines, but this has kind of captured me. So, hope you update soon.

This story is so rad so far. The writing is great and the story is so cool so far (I love stories with sirens). Also bonus points for the girls being hardcore. Keep up the good work!

I love reading the story hope you make more

This is great! Update it soon!

Seraphina Jones

Cliffhangers are so hard. I need to know what next.

That...was..awesome ! :) I loved every minute of it.

And you seem to be on point with the medical stuff, btw. Though Mabel will need to see a doctor at some point, in the event blood's building up under her skull.

So far so good...tense, all the characters are still awesome, and I look forward to an update! Nice to see a multi-chapter!

Awesome start :) I can't wait to see what happens next now. I was totally not expecting them to be stranded in quite that matter, and can't wait to see how they survive this.