This is awful

Love this story so far. Great job on the OC stuff so far but I can't wait for issei to get to Kuoh and see how it all plays out because chaos brigade Pov OC's and OOC's are always fun to read.

Is it wrong that this fic reminds of guerrila Sam's story a Chance due to the similar themes and mood setting in these stories? It's good, that's a given and I like it to a certain extent. This is somewhat hart warming to read without getting too squishy.
Saluut.

That was entertaining. Really cool.

Interesting idea for a sacred gear. Though its reminding me somewhat of Unlimited Blade works in how those people were describing it. Kinda interesting that. I wonder if as he gets better at it if his world inside his mind grows larger and if its more a form of magic rather than a sacred gear. That would be cool.

Huh. He can make anything. That's unique.

Interesting. This has a lot of potential to be cruel and unusual. I like this type of story sometimes. Broken Wings is a great one so I trust this one will be too.

Yo, blueprints, is this supposed to be a prequel to Broken Wings, or an alternate universe where the BW characters are inserted into this story, but Issei doesn't choose to join Maria?

Yay Maria... damn i really her... hmm, you should really do a story with her as the pairing

anyways, pretty good chapter...

hmm, not bad

if it was Yaoi, i would be abandoning ship...

hmm, interesting... was that Maria? oh, i so hope it was... she has to be my fav character in Broken Wings, so i am very hopeful she is in this as well and plays a larger role or at least a more visible one

Looking forward to the next chapter

maybe this is wrong but i more like (i don't know anyone else) issei is living alone and he have a phone soo if they want issei kill someone it's more easy yeah i know you maybe will not do this but please make issei more you know more weapon :D

This comment of yours

"A new story. Welcome to my house. You can leave your hopes and dreams of a Gary Stue, handsome, overpowered, tall womanizer with a harem at the door. These things don't exist in my world. ''Broken Wings'' Issei had it bad, don't you think? Ara, but he has a lover, had a loving teacher, underlings...How about not having anyone at all? How about being alone? How about not having Ddraig? Can I make it even worse for a person who had it fucking terrible?

...I can. Who do you think I AM?"

Gives to me a irresistible will to read your fic...Gary Stu bores after some time

The update was amazing my man. Continue to put out incredible works such as this!