Reviews for Glitch |
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Karma09 chapter 3 . 1/16/2017 Garnet is stronger than Jasper WTF |
MONOCHROME SORROW chapter 15 . 12/19/2016 BRILLIANT! I haven't been on the edge of my seat in a Long time FINNALY Someone produces something Good on here I don't really have anything but FB Utube and Fanfiction but.. A SEQUEL IS IN DEMAND! It was so brilliant I Loved it. 10/10 you are named My number one Fanfic of the Month and Please I'm Begging you for that Sequel. |
maizcorn chapter 5 . 11/29/2016 woaaahhhhhhh |
maizcorn chapter 3 . 11/29/2016 Really nice. Approve! |
MiStars chapter 17 . 9/30/2016 Wow. this is great fanfic. I found it from this site: manasurge deviantart com/art/NO-PERIDOT-553323963 I love this and read them everything from start the jailbreak. It is much feeling. No wonder why Garnet can't handle it and focused unfuse into Sapphire and Ruby. I really love the happy ending. So emotion! Great story. Steven should heal her gem but i don't bother it and like to listen your story. Great Job for this fanfic! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2016 I really enjoyed reading this, but just one thing; please don't space the speeches out. That is seriously bothering me, and that could be a huge turn off to readers. And please don't use bold, italics, and underline all at once. It came off as a lot too strong. Maybe in a dramatic, near dead scene but certainly not in the begining. Otherwise, great job! I really liked this version of 'Jailbreak'. |
TurqouiseGirl chapter 5 . 2/29/2016 U spelled which like witch #ISHIPIT Lapidot |
feels chapter 14 . 2/28/2016 OHH NO NOT MAH BABY! NOOOOO PERI! I'm actually crying right now that ending finally got to me. I've been fighting back the feels throughout the whole fix but jasper's last line finally got to me. I praise your work, kudos for you, you have a truly amazing talent for writing :) |
Lunny chapter 17 . 12/29/2015 I enjoyed this fanfic! It was gr8! Very well written, lots of feels. 10/10 |
OMNISENSE95 chapter 4 . 12/11/2015 Wait... Peridot didn't take part in Rose's rebellion. I don't think she was even around at the time. |
ArcticFox319 chapter 15 . 9/15/2015 Loved it if you make a sequel post a chap to tell us about it |
jade treeko chapter 15 . 9/15/2015 XD don't you love writing reviews on your phone and accidentally posting them before you finish?! I know I do!...anyway,I just wanted to ask if a sequal would be territory for gem egg hell. Hardly anyone writes about them when it comes to gemlings, which is a shame because I think they're adorable together and even more adorable as parents! Also just wanna add at the end that I feel bad for Jasper. Like really bad. They basically banished her. I hope also hope we get to see how she's getting on on her new home. Anyway,the choice is up to you. I'll read it regardless! Thanks for writing this story. You're great! |
Guest chapter 15 . 9/15/2015 This . . You captured everyone's personalities perfectly! And you made Lapis and Peridot's relationship was both sad and natural and heartwarming. Really made it seem like they used to be very close back on homeworld. Really. This is one of the best Lapidot I've ever read! You even believe that her arms and legs are prosthetics(the power that goes with it was a nice touch too, but I think I was a little confused on how it works. Her gem has to be cracked to use it?)! This is the only story of yours that I've read,but OMG,I want the sequal. I NEED that sequal! I really want to see where their relationship goes if there is to be a sequal(maybe even some adorable gemling |
Eri Hunters- Goddess of Minds chapter 15 . 9/14/2015 AHHH it was so good |