Thanks for the info on gems. It was cool, awesome story so far.

My favorite boss theme song is the abyss watchers from dark souls 3. That song and fight is so epic!

Just like your other readers, I have a couple of ideas for you. Next chapter, Peridot could get next dibs with Steven. Lapis and Jasper have not tested out Malachite yet. What the original 3 gems gave them a dance lesson at the battle ruins, similar to the episode "Alone together". Whatever happens, I don't want any tension between them, I just want all gems to be just friends. No seriousness, unless they have petty arguments.

Another chapter is that Bismuth finally joins your story. Are the gems still not wearing their stars? If not, then I think Bismuth can take her's off too while making up for attacking Steven. If Bismuth poofed Lapis like in the past, I wonder if she'll get nervous when near Bismuth, expecielly when she acts tough. Lapis might want to be near Steven.

One more thing, I think the Cluster arc in this story should end soon, that way you can catch up. I don't know when this story will end, but I don't want this one to go infinite. All stories must end one day.

So when the chapter will come since 2020 is coming soon. But am not rushing you, take your time.

This story is so wholesome

Did... Did you just predict the pink diamond reveal?!

Need more please I’m begging

You...monster

First I want to say that I love the story, this is one of those stories I never want to see end because it's that good. I can't wait to see the next update!

one question. is navi black diamond?

is navy black diamond?

I'm gonna be short and to the point.
Despite all the non-canon stuff that made me cringe every time (I started reading this to have something Stevene-y post-CYM), I decided to give your story a chance. And I'm glad I did: the character arcs are so wonderfully written, it might as well be canon. In the beginning, there were a couple of places where I felt like characters changed their mind too fast, or the pacing was too fast (in fact, my original summary for the story ~10 chapters in was "A jailbreak AU written before major plot points with loads of non-canon info. E.g. Steven retreats to his gem. AU assumes Steven has already matured by Jailbreak. Really quick changes of emotions"), but the Lapis arc shows that you grew as a writer as a result of this story. So this fanfic is something that I can recommend to other fans. At least this one is ongoing... Right?

I hope a new chapter will enfulge soon! This is by far my favorite story on this app! I think Warren G. stands for Warren Guinea Pig. (Or Galndolf) I honestly forget the name. Anyways I really enjoyed this chapter! The most creepiest scenes so far is with the large bug creature and Lapis. I felt like crying for no apparent reason. Probably because Lapis is my most favorite character. Thanks so much for writing this FanFiction!

P.S: As long as this is, I have at least two more things to say...er...write. First, if you ever want to give Lapis her own song, I highly recommend the song ‘Dear Fellow Traveler’ by Sea Wolf. Second, please add Blue Pearl in it. She is a dove, and you already mentioned her. Okay, bye. I will shut up now.

Isn't Warren B a rapper? Regardless I enjoy your story. It's good to see you update it. However I will never understand Steven's oblivious-ness to all the romance around him. Seriously. That is so going to backfire. Especially when it involves super powered gem creatures.

Either way, good luck and keep on, keeping on.

Can’t wait to see how this plays out.
I’m intrigued by this story, one of the best fanfics I have ever read BTW.
I feel like I have to say “thank you” so...Thank you, for creating an amazing fanfic.