Reviews for The Revenge
oriharaizayatr248 chapter 10 . 2/11/2019
Hello author-san can ask something? in the next 2 or 3 chapter...is there a beating-a-punk-to-death club? Cause while i love this story goes...i kinda want to natsu to make jerkvix to submit to him just to make it a lesson of it whole life...and maybe mira, erza and ultear to torture him too?*innocent smile* im sorry for my way of speaking i hope you dont take it to heart and sorry for my grammar im bot good at speaking english...

P.S.

I personaly kinda hate tra-ass
GoldeN ViZionZ chapter 9 . 1/19/2019
I feel like you are sticking way too close to canon in this chapter. Like when Happy acts like he knows Natsu’s strength like he did in canon and with the whole Mira not having magic even though Lisanna is still alive.
GoldeN ViZionZ chapter 8 . 1/19/2019
Last chapter you had Lisanna show Lucy around and now she’s dead? And if she isn’t dead then Mira should still have her magic.
pokedude816 chapter 10 . 12/17/2018
Love this story! Hope you update! Also, I believe Natsu will get an awesome harem so Lisanna and Lucy as well?
Guest chapter 10 . 5/13/2018
Please keep going, this is so awesome it just has to keep going even though it really doesn't but still
E.N.D chapter 1 . 11/10/2017
Acnologia didn't talk to me after he killed Igneel. He didn't even acknowledge me. He just healed his wound (Igneel ripped one of Acnologia's arms off) with his breath attack (the same breath attack he used to finish Igneel off) to weld the flesh together and flew off in the morning. Acnologia's breath attack was so hot that what was left of Igneel's corpse was still steaming.
Neko-chan chapter 10 . 2/1/2017
Please update TT I really like this story
Shadow-Fire Dragon Slayer chapter 10 . 7/8/2016
This is an incredible story. Please continue to update.
Angryhenry chapter 10 . 6/6/2016
Love it
Guest chapter 10 . 6/3/2016
Fuck ya! Can't wait for the next chapter!
blueknight0712 chapter 10 . 5/31/2016
Update soon.
2arkhanV01 chapter 10 . 5/26/2016
Great story but can you try to make the chapters a little longer but I'm just asking you don't have to if you dont want. But like i side great story.
DdraigTrueEmperor9 chapter 10 . 5/25/2016
The chapter was good.
But it was not what I was expecting.
Since, I though Natsu would embrace his magic and it side-effects, I also though he would well, say that Ultear, Erza and Mira are his mates or future mates.

It seems a new laxus is in the guild( travis ) as arrogant, jerk and idiot as the one before him( laxus )

Looking forward to read about Natsu done some damage or breaking some bones, to the bastard that try to hurt Ultear.

Keep the good work. Until the new update.
frozem1 chapter 10 . 5/24/2016
very good chapter! I liked the chapter! This Travix just created his own grave ... good chapter! looking forward to the next chapter!

ps: using google translator to comment!
rrm232 chapter 10 . 5/24/2016
Wow that is a lot of seals to put Natsu in. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter and see them fight. Hope you update as soon as you can.
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