Thanks for the hard work love the story _

‘Okaa san’s real name was Hotaru Kurosawa and always had her brown hair up in two buns, her hazel eyes wide and almond shaped. I had no idea where the blue eyes come from, but I guessed that was a reincarnation thing.’

Or an anime thing, lol. Punett squares clearly dictate that its impossible for two dark-eyed people to have a blue-eyed baby. Hate to break it to you, ramen man, but your wife cheated on you.

Im so sorry, ramen man.

(Scarlet_Bullet on AO3)

Heya! Finally caught up to the latest chapter! Thanks so much for writing a great story like this! Especially from such an interesting pov, but without harping on about it too much! All your characters were heaps of fun to read about, and Hayate was a really interesting choice for the sensei. Especially because he's only tobetsku (however it's spelt, blaah) jounin level. Haha, I don't think he was even using 20%!
Uuuuuum, I have the sneaking suspicion it has been more than two weeks since you last updated... XD
Hope that means your life is very engaging and interesting, rather than anything more morose.
Aah, I would have really loved to see how Kisame came into this story, and also what you would do about Hayate's expiry date! Oh, well! I can only hope and follow!

Cute, fluffy chapter! And still ends on a captivating note! Thanks!

Hehehe, you are really good at ending the chapter on an amusing note! Well done! I'm really happy that Tora has made friends with Tenten! And I'm also intrigued to see how she tries to make friends with Akuma. He would be a great friend to have tho!

Bahahahahahaahahahaha
That ending tho! Love it!

This is cool! I cant wait to see what happens next with team 11

Honestly the amount that Tora was punished just pissed me off. Having to do her sisters chores, extra work, and staying behind to clean for a month?! She wasn't the one who started the fight, although I do acknowledge that she went pretty far. Keiko was the one who did the dumbass fly prank. This was mostly venting, but it felt good to get it off my chest, as I've read this fic once or twice before I got my account and I was angry each time. I hope you have a wonderful day, though!

I like the story but keiko turned into a real bitch.

Gregorvich (another reviewer)

"lie" is not the English lie (false, not true). Authors of Japanese things usually use the spelling "lie" for the pronounciation "EE-e". The actually romanized spelling should be "ie" which means no. However, the word is either auto corrected when the author types it out, or the author is going off only oral information. You see, "ie" sound similar to "lee-e" due to the foreign intonation (not usually done in English, but common in Japanese) of the beginning of the word.

Can't wait for the next chapter keep it up

S.I. Or not, still good to read.

I really want to see her use the no staff with the air!

I like your fanfiction, but I'm confused, you wrote "lie" instead of saying "yes" or "no". Is "lie" another language for yes or no? Was she lying to Iruka and you as a writer couldn't think of a good lie so you just wrote "lie"? Typo? I see this in other fanfics as well which is the only reason I'm asking. I haven't seen it in any actual literature so I'm confused.

I totally love this story so far! Love, love, love!