I didn't understand this chapter at all. I started to get annoyed and skimmed through a lot of it. Barely understood last chapter too. I really do enjoy the story, I only wish that you stuck to Jon's POV more. You write other characters very well, but the constant changes in POV to all these other characters, some of them utterly random, is tedious. I would prefer to follow through Jon than follow Jon through others.

So instead of being the son of Rhaegar and Lyanna, Jon Snow is the son of Lyanna and R'hllor? If is that, I do hope at least one of Rhaegar's children is still alive in this TL

okay we've done way too many chapters outside of Jon's perspective it's great once in a while but I feel like we're just watching him from the outside more oft then not

That's so sad I'm crying. poor frost

This was convoluted but when u added the doom of valyria it became even more so to a degree I can not read lol

No manchessssssss esta de poca madre la historia espero puedas leer este msj. Vientos carnal o carnala XD

No se los leerás esto pero la lectura me está encantando hasta ahora, la redacción el rumbo en el que va, apenas voy por el tercer capítulo y ya me está gustando Jon snow es uno de mis personajes favoritos, gracias por esta historia.

Fantastic story.

the greater mysteries unfold

interesting

ive certainly never heard or read about this concept in the asoif fandom.

i really hope you continue this story. its very good

This is really good it's one of the liked stories I have read.

Interesting wolf/Stark dynamics.

Damn. That was sad AF.