Reviews for The Bar Scene
Stephiel9816 chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
Love it! It was cute! Good job!
jj chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
just like them to have a game wait how old is atem?
ThisIsMyParadox chapter 1 . 7/11/2015
Oh, I love re-reading this story.
Myfanfix chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
Sequel!sequel!
gotenmalfoy chapter 1 . 5/28/2015
Atemu and Yugi is beautiful as they met, very nice!
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
This is awesome! I'm kinda disappointed I didn't find it until now! I freakig LOVE older yugi fics especially auss he IS older than Yami technically! XD! I loved their characterization despite their ages yugi and gain were a lot on! And I commend Yami for his determination and his want of a real relationship and I love yugi and his moral even though Yami is gorgeous and clearly wants him. I do wonder how old Yami is actually bt I also I ss how yugi can tell when he's lying to!
The style was fantastic too! This whole story is great! I can't wai to check out your other stories!
moonlightclock chapter 1 . 4/29/2015
I really can't wait for the next chapter to come out please update a new chapter soon I can't wait for it
Hergan chapter 1 . 4/24/2015
I liked this. Some sequel ideas: What's their date like ? How old is Atemu? flashbacks to the night after (if you write that kind of thing). sorry if they're kinda boring
shire chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
I think it'd be nice if you made a sequel. The fic is nice but the ending doesn't really seem...finished. At least, not to me. Maybe include how old Atemu really is and that he's in truth a bit older than Yugi. I couldn't really get how old he was but I could have missed it. Or have Yugi have a crying meltdown because of what happened, you know filled with self loathing and fearing he'll now go to jail and have Atemu feel guilty and try to make it up to him. Hope that helps. Good story!
xLightEvadesDarknessX chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
Hell yeah to a sequel. I couldn't help but smile while reading this xD
I love how you made their personalities too, its nice to read something different (':