Reviews for Parallel Lines
chidoripotato chapter 1 . 11/22/2018
I was surprised when coming back to find this story that it has so few favorites and follows. This is one of my favorite fanfics on this site.
E.C. Drunk Philosopher chapter 45 . 4/17/2018
This story deserves much more attention.
StorotS chapter 45 . 3/28/2017
I wanted to know if writing fanfiction was illegal or not.I also wanted to try it but don't have the knowledge on if it is allowed or your response in the beginning of the next chapter you
oetuazim chapter 45 . 1/7/2017
This story is absolutely amazing. Typical Itachi Kisame stories hardly delve into real life topics. Kisame's backstory was absoluetely heart breaking without seeming over exaggerated. The whole story, from Kisame begging Itachi to give him a chance, to how Sasuke copes with Itachi's illness is so believable. I absolutely love your style of writing and can not wait to read more from you.
Random chapter 45 . 12/4/2016
I don't want to be that reader but could you please try to hurry on those new chapters please!
Random chapter 45 . 12/4/2016
I don't want to be that reader but could you please try to hurry on those new chapters please!
I'mafangirlIcantbecontrolled chapter 45 . 11/5/2016
:0 oh no I told myself not to get emotionally attached to this story but there I go. Hope you update, this ending is such a cliffhanger, love the story
TheSlyMistress chapter 45 . 7/5/2016
Why do you do this to me? XD I was like wtf! you better find Kisame Sasuke and don't you dare play around with Naruto or who ever XD. Like dang. BTW I am so mad I missed the Hashimada in the last chapter like yass that would be me XD, including them in the story, of course they would be Itachi's doctors and have sex in his room while Itachi slept, in my mind XD. That would be the perfect! XD

Also I am totally enjoying Tsunade like yass with the clickity popity boop hills, like yass girl although yo feet must be tired and red and bleeding. Like who the hell could just wear those as a doctor and a surgeon...no comment. She needs to get her life together.

BTW Itachi got into Sasuke's ass when he called him, like yasssss! Ita you betta do that shit like nobodies business. God I love him so much for being like "Bitch go get my baby daddy and you better go find him." Then Sasuke sighed and pushed Naruto off of him and went to find Kisame (of course this is what happened in my mind)

And Itachi woke up to hot delicious HashiMada sex XD. I am too much XD

Let's see I am glad Kisame is a match, and I hope their relationship last and becomes something wonderful because Kisame will always be inside of him XD (literally) XD Ugly puns for the wind. Like they should have a transplant wedding like uhhh...so cute. (I don't know what a transplant wedding would be or look like lol, but I love the idea though.)

Anyways till next time I can't wait! I'm glad Kisame is a match I sorta figured that would happened. Now they intersected and they might intersect into the bed room (Really, but not really) anyways it's almost 2 in morning and you wanted me to review and you kept saying you didn't review yet and you see what I'm like at 2 in the morning, empty and full of KisaIta lust and love. Because I live to tell and I live for the KisaIta.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Im sure it's going to be amazing if you don't fuck it up with like Itachi dying during surgery altough that would be a deep ending, or Kisame committing suicide and Itachi getting his marrow after that...good god that would be so deep.

I took a break from the People's court for this and I have to say one of the best things I've ever did. Nice chapter and can't wait for the next one
AbsoluteAnarchy chapter 45 . 7/1/2016
Yay! Maybe I'm speaking too soon but finally Itachi's luck is beginning to change!
It's about time something good happened to the poor guy because so far he's had to deal with shit, shit, and more shit. :DD
(Enjoyed the introduction of Tsunade and Shizune very much. They gave this chapter an uplifting undertone. :3)

I can only hope Sasuke finds Kisame soon. I love that he's a match - now my mind is conjuring images of a superhero Kisa swooping in to save Itachi from the jaws of cancer. Like a bone marrow spiderman. *gasp* MARROWMAN! A star is born. o_o
Marrowman, Marrowman, does whatever a skeleton can,
Can he swing from a thread?
No he can't, but he can save his friend!
Hey there, there goes the Marrowman!~

I just know something is gonna go wrong here. There's no way it'll be smooth sailing from here, and I'm bracing myself right now. XDD
Carry on! X3
Guest chapter 45 . 6/27/2016
No puedo esperar .esto se pone bueno! Esperare con ancias la próxima actualizacion...sasuke encuentralo!
Shinan7 chapter 45 . 6/27/2016
Aaaahhhhh, my heart is pounding! Can't wait for the next bit!
Dragon77 chapter 45 . 6/27/2016
Yay I'm so happy Kisame a match and hopefully Sasuke can find him.
Shinee's Hypeman chapter 45 . 6/27/2016
Yay he's a match! And now that Sasuke knows he's a match I bet he's gonna do everything in his power to find Kisame! Lmao
AbsoluteAnarchy chapter 44 . 6/21/2016
Bitches be like:
"My bf is so mean to me!"
- 5 minutes later -
"He said sorry! I really think he's changed!"

God damn it, Miru. XDD Kisame risked a lot to help you out and then you go back to being a dumbass. The guy is trash. I don't understand your logic, Jesus Christ. XDDD

"A tall man with long, unkempt black hair holding the hand of a tan skinned man with long brown hair."
Could this be...MADARA AND HASHIRAMA?! I can practically feel the level of Sal in this chapter. It's almost as if he tried to hack your story. Holy shit. X'D

But yeah, I got this notification on Saturday and I completely forgot about it until now. Other things have been happening, but I'm back today and I'm ready to kick Kisame's ass if he tries to murder Sasuke when no one's around.
Just because you can, doesn't mean you should. Even if you could get away with it. Scot-free. With no consequences. (Actually I'm starting to warm to this idea too...)
*Ahem* No, go to your happy place, Kisa. Think of Itachi. Poor little bald Itachi in his knitted cap. Think of what happened to your fucking knuckles last time. XDD
libretamagica chapter 44 . 6/17/2016
No kisame! ...Lamento escuchar que la este pasando mal esperó que todo se solucione pronto cuidate y gracias por escribir
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