I definitely want a sequel to this one! I want to know what happens between Bella and Alice!

can u make a m rated equal to this with what happens in the room?

Dude I'd go through with it, she's hot! I so wish sameness would take this and continue the story, like maybe she ends up falling for the pixie.

Hey, hope you decide to continue this story :) I saw that it says completed but... a girl can only hope :D Anyway, just so you know... it has a great start for a longer fanfic.
You have the catch alread :) You only need to make it longer, i know i would read it and im sure others would too.

I'm gonna follow this story just in case you decide to do a longer fic :P hehehe

Good luck

Ah another winner this should be interesting to see its development. I can't wait for the next installment!

Great love it ! Please make a second chapter lol !

Hah, nice XD So many ways that ending could be interpreted...

This was awesome! Can't wait to read more :)

please tell me you are gonna continue this!