WTF

Wow! I like hinata pov! Really love... And i like pair naruto x sarada but any fanfic no realistis, like hinata x biruto or.. I like normal situation! Naruto x hinata but sarada like Naruto... And Naruto, give apportunity.. Hehhe next it's wow fanfic

Just amazing the way you portraded naruto as the seventh hokage, making him insanily powerfull and kind, just the perfect caring man. I loved Saradas point of view, as well as narutos. Just one thing, and its just a comment, not a critic, but i think that you made sasukw just a lite too much like a bad guy. He supposedly redeemed himself during his trip after the Fourth Great Shinoby War, didn't he? Weel but that its just a dettail.
Please keep on weiting stories like this, becaouse i just LOVED it! Keep it up

Like with your other works, I find it very easy to binge on your unique take on the Narutoverse. I hope that you'll be able to continue/find the reason or time to continue this story and hopefully complete it!

I've been looking for interesting post-Shippuden fics to lose myself in, and this is certainly one of them. Big kudos to the familial aspect in Naruto's approach as hokage! That's something that I've really wanted to be explored in fanfic.

Very interesting

Oh my! Is this a post-Naruto fic? My, yes it is! Yes, it is, precious, and we love it! Seriously, I need this. After all these years where Naruto was a constant in my life, I just can't stay without! I like your approach at this. The relationship between Sarada and Naruto is very interesting. What's Naruto reason for his feeling of "wanting to be her father"? It is because of his unrequited love of Sakura? Does he feel closer to his childhood love by trying to be a father to her daughter?

I really like this fic. Plot or no, I just like hearing your ideas. You have a very unique style of introduction that leads the reader on in real time and fosters a sense of wonder and curiosity. If you decide to take this story further, I'll be glad to continue reading it!

Woah woah woah...

Woah.

Speechless.

I can say without a doubt that this has been the most surprising read of 2016 for me. And from a story that follows canon no less. The characterization, the drama, the way you write...simply perfect. Bravo to you sir, because this story is amazing.

You know damn well I'll be checking my emails for the next update.

Policy.

Like the story. Keep it up.

Stay golden

AHHHH. What's gonna happen?! Give me more :0000000

Short. That's the first thing that comes to mind. Umm, it's not necessarily a bad thing just that this was short compared to your other chapters, so it threw me off. I also wanted to reiterate that I don't like character bashing, but I acknowledge that Sasuke has been a pretty shitty/absentee father to Sarada and he probably deserves an ass kicking.

I look forward to more.

So Himiwari tripped over a rock in the future? That Naruto had already kicked away? Does she get confused between the future and the present? And I get that she me see a rock from the future, but to trip on it her foot would half to hit it, right? So... Is she actually interacting with objects from the future? It was a bit confusing.
I think Hinata's POV was written well and fit her. It's nice see you writing from various different POVs and actually show how different characters think and behave instead of going way AU with their personalities like many other authors.

Didn't particularly enjoy this chapter. I feel like less happened this chapter, and a lot of t felt fluffy. But it did help with some character development.

Interesting take on future Naruto's power, but I don't really find it believable. Cannon Naruto was always a brawler, I have a hard time seeing him blowing some guy up from half way across the continent. But the scene was written nicely, and had a good pace/flow to it. I think I would have preferred it of Naruto teleported out to the guys location and blew him up face to face, but I recognize that this scene was most likely a plot device to showcase his power to Sarada. So in that aspect I can accept it going a bit AU.

You redeemed yourself in this chapter with how well you wrote Sarada. She's the only character from the new generation that I lved off the bat, and I think you captured her interaction with Naruto in a very beleiveable and relatable way. And you know what they say, good writing is something you can relate to.