| Reviews for Re:Gamer |
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   frankiebayer2002 chapter 94 . 7/25 This is great please update soon |
| SpriteBlue chapter 7 . 7/23 Whats up with the 1st person switch? |
| DeviantREAD chapter 7 . 7/20 love the Forest movie reference |
| Boomshanka chapter 98 . 7/4 Herr Schindler? |
| Boomshanka chapter 80 . 7/3 Baron Dienstardt is Arthas Menethil reborn? Holy FUCK! |
| AwronZizao chapter 5 . 7/3 Why didn't he just.. you know.. fly UP?! Orcs aren't 15ft tall, wtf? Isn't he supposed to be a war veteran by this point? The fuck is going on..? |
| Simianpower chapter 1 . 6/26 Well... I like long-form stories, but not when they can't handle even the basics like whether they're first-person or third-person. This switches randomly from "he/Naruto" to "I" and back paragraph by paragraph. And verb tenses, pluralization, etc. are spotty at best. Maybe I'll try again if it has a thorough beta cycle, but I'm not counting on that to happen to a story that hasn't been updated in six months. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/22 TF is this it's been 10 chapters and naruto hasn't said Dattebayo once |
| uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 56 . 6/12 gov od ch o |
| uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 52 . 6/12 goooooiod ch p |
| uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 51 . 6/12 go o o od ch p |
| Guest chapter 129 . 6/4 damn. weakest chapter yet |
| Guest chapter 97 . 6/4 lmao pathetic |
| Guest chapter 96 . 6/4 What about intrigue? You said three sentences about it. Stopping in the middle of the third sentences, switched to a random topic, got lost filling 2/3rds of another chapter with boring Candy filler, then never talked about the subject again and just forgot about it? Does this go with the other 30 ideas/skill/Gamer powers that are half thought up and quickly dumped to never be used again? Im sure another three dozen chapter devoted to a Trolls family life in bullet form is much better then filling in or using any of the many many many game mechanics you throw around, or completing a sword, or a quest (finally for once.. without it always being an accident and surprise it was ever even finished!), maybe have more then a single line about preparing for the war...before you quickly forget it and have him cook dinner and spend time with his family... so what if that's so much more important then training to keep them ALIVE! Hey maybe another chapter on government and the economy... you know how you like to change it every other chapter without actually ever DOING anything that would change it! Honestly why do you even bother posting when your just writing to releave stress not to actually write a good story! Why post a story you WONT read from the beginning and YOU wouldn't enjoy reading if you tried too! |
| Guest chapter 92 . 6/4 - - - - - - - Story? - - -Nope filler just to say you did something |
