I think Dudley been nice to harry his pretty cool you know

5/30/20 Just found this story. I've been enjoying it a lot. Too bad there's not more of it.

this story is so horrifying yet interestingly adorable that I don't want to stop reading!

omg! i love it! can't wait for the next one!

Story sucks

Love it :))))

love your butterfly effect . always makes for a way better story than canon retelling

This story is amazing! Please, keep it up! It truly is original

oh man. this is good. hopefully Petunia grows a backbone and does what is right...protect both of those boys even if it means leaving her husband.

Chapter 4 make me want to keep reading despite it being early fly in the morning and not sleeping at all. It felt like I was in the story, the sheer terror that Dudley felt, it felt like I was feeling it too. I couldn't stop reading it, I had to know what was going to happen. I hoped that they would make it out alive and happy because I have realized that in this story Dudley and Harry won't be all happy with everything being perfect, that nothing would run smoothly with only a little bit of problems here and there. This is going to change the personality and perspective of both Dudley and Harry. Going back to their normal lives, and try to do everything as normally as possible, will be a challenge. there might even be trust issues with adults but I don't want to stop reading. I felt that it was so well written out with what took place. I admit that I cried for Harry and Dudley, the paranoia that build up with suspense make me so worried and concern for them. I felt paranoid and kept wondering if this could really happen. I really want to keep reading as I hope to see what becomes of this story. I hope you update soon and I hope to see more of Petunia. I know I will come back to read this story again. This was a great story to read. tho, I have to ask, I don't think fire trucks are yellow in America, I must have read wrong. I will read this again to make sure I haven't make a mistake.

This was wonderful! I've never read a fic with Dudley as the main character before and it's so well done!

You are a lovely person for writing this. Thank you so much for updating.

I cried way too much at this story.
It's just so tear-jerking...

u know when u have found a interesting story and get so into it and are hooked u dont realize your on the last chapter until bam you move to click onto the next chapter and than your like wtf what omg this was the last one and u look up and scream NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

always i do it always when i find awesome fic like this and thank god duddly found harry just in time before that creeper pedo killer did anything thank god and im glad he got killed but so want to know what will happen next will petunia be more kind and more helpful to harry and will veron change will duddly tell his parents what happened or ask for self defence classes and ask to join the little scouts with harry
so would like to know and also if duddly goes back to the diagon alley would he look for magic self defence devices like protection jewelry or get a elf or something?

I'll have to check it out. ;) I love this chapter and story outline! XD