Reviews for Moonlit |
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LilLinkGirl chapter 32 . 12/27/2019 ...wait this isn't complete? lol Dear God I thought it said complete at the top lol Oh well what can you do? I do find this interesting and do hope that one day you'll come back to this and finish it 'cause I really wish to see were you take the story and how you make it end :) |
Jaely chapter 2 . 3/18/2018 Well now, I don’t think I can really say... well anything about the changes in this part of the story, simply because I would give too much of the story away! Though I will say that I really am intrigued by the changes, and I’m looking forward to reading how they influence the other parts of the story I have already read before. |
Jaely chapter 1 . 3/18/2018 Ah! You added the Miranda Rights in this version! I decided to read from the beginning to see what was different from the version on P&P to what you have here. Though I will admit that if the changes are small I might miss them, as my memory isn’t all that great, but something like adding in the Mirandizing of that guy, kinda sticks out. You know I had briefly thought about it when I first read it, but by the time I got to the end of Brave and Emailed you, It was life long gone! lol so many other amazing things happened between, that I completely forgot!BTW I do hope you know who this review is from. |
marlastiano chapter 32 . 7/1/2017 Good :) |
marlastiano chapter 31 . 6/18/2017 :) |
EroSlackerMicha chapter 31 . 6/18/2017 well the fuse has just been lit. wonder if Robyn will get to talk or will it all go to hell in a hand basket. keep up the good work |
KitsuneGirl1994 chapter 31 . 6/18/2017 Oh hell... shit's about to go down, but I hope Dominique let's Robyn explain herself first,and doesn't start doubting Elisa because of this reveal :(! |
EroSlackerMicha chapter 30 . 6/11/2017 are we selling tickets to the hideaway? humans are like rats, you let one in and then your over run :D j/k |
MuffinRamsey chapter 30 . 6/11/2017 Great chapter! |
marlastiano chapter 30 . 6/10/2017 Good :) |
MuffinRamsey chapter 29 . 6/9/2017 So good! |
deathgundam006 chapter 29 . 6/6/2017 i have to say that i have been reading this since last year and i only now noticed that from the show and your story that the gargolyes talk like angarians from the new mass effect game. keep up the good work my friend. |
EroSlackerMicha chapter 29 . 6/6/2017 want to grab her and yell "Don't trust Robyn!" |
marlastiano chapter 29 . 6/6/2017 :) |
EroSlackerMicha chapter 28 . 5/19/2017 Robyn's gonna ruin the trust and Dominique's gonna wonder who she can trust if people she "knew" start betraying her. |