Reviews for Moonlit
LilLinkGirl chapter 32 . 12/27/2019
...wait this isn't complete? lol Dear God I thought it said complete at the top lol Oh well what can you do? I do find this interesting and do hope that one day you'll come back to this and finish it 'cause I really wish to see were you take the story and how you make it end :)
Jaely chapter 2 . 3/18/2018
Well now, I don’t think I can really say... well anything about the changes in this part of the story, simply because I would give too much of the story away! Though I will say that I really am intrigued by the changes, and I’m looking forward to reading how they influence the other parts of the story I have already read before.
Jaely chapter 1 . 3/18/2018
Ah! You added the Miranda Rights in this version! I decided to read from the beginning to see what was different from the version on P&P to what you have here. Though I will admit that if the changes are small I might miss them, as my memory isn’t all that great, but something like adding in the Mirandizing of that guy, kinda sticks out. You know I had briefly thought about it when I first read it, but by the time I got to the end of Brave and Emailed you, It was life long gone! lol so many other amazing things happened between, that I completely forgot!BTW I do hope you know who this review is from.
marlastiano chapter 32 . 7/1/2017
Good :)
marlastiano chapter 31 . 6/18/2017
:)
EroSlackerMicha chapter 31 . 6/18/2017
well the fuse has just been lit. wonder if Robyn will get to talk or will it all go to hell in a hand basket.
keep up the good work
KitsuneGirl1994 chapter 31 . 6/18/2017
Oh hell... shit's about to go down, but I hope Dominique let's Robyn explain herself first,and doesn't start doubting Elisa because of this reveal :(!
EroSlackerMicha chapter 30 . 6/11/2017
are we selling tickets to the hideaway? humans are like rats, you let one in and then your over run :D j/k
MuffinRamsey chapter 30 . 6/11/2017
Great chapter!
marlastiano chapter 30 . 6/10/2017
Good :)
MuffinRamsey chapter 29 . 6/9/2017
So good!
deathgundam006 chapter 29 . 6/6/2017
i have to say that i have been reading this since last year and i only now noticed that from the show and your story that the gargolyes talk like angarians from the new mass effect game. keep up the good work my friend.
EroSlackerMicha chapter 29 . 6/6/2017
want to grab her and yell "Don't trust Robyn!"
marlastiano chapter 29 . 6/6/2017
:)
EroSlackerMicha chapter 28 . 5/19/2017
Robyn's gonna ruin the trust and Dominique's gonna wonder who she can trust if people she "knew" start betraying her.
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