Never in my life have I seen a more horrendous collection of run on sentences O_O I am absolutely speechless.

Oof. Nothing like being interrupted.

Im still here. Its been awhile though so ill have to go back and reread it. Thanks for writing another chapter!

I hope she isn't from a significant clan . Bc I'm getting once in a lifetime new linage vibe from her.

Still watching still waiting... Please continue... Also hi welcome back is it weird that i had this favorite from back in 2015? Hope life has been good to you in the mean time!

Awwww,,, good story! But where are the updates! Please finish it...

*face palm..* ignore these reviews I was typing a review for another story and some how my review was posted into my own story.. Ugh :(

Wonderful chapter!
Update soon! :)

race traitor

One who has turned against their race and/or ethinticity in favor of those who would persecute them. ie a self loather and/or one who is ashamed of their heritage.

"Most white race traitors are rich liberals who were spawned by the yuppie/hippie generations."

This is good. You have improved well.

God, the bite is unexpected.

I see why it's rated T.

All you need is to fix your grammer for this whole thing and it's good.
Good job! :)

I like the way you put the " " on Uchiha.

Nice flashback.

Keep at it!

The only thing you have to work on is just grammer.

It's good.

Biggest mistake,

Grammer, capitals for last names.

Mito Uzumaki, you cannot just assume that she is bad tempered like Kushina Uzumaki or Karin.

This is interesting though,

Ninjas don't reveal the art of their jutsu's, only if someone else does it. Like Nagato's planetary ball. How Naruto knew how it worked.
Hashirama Senju is not the type to brag, or Tobirama.
Hashirama is the cool type with Tobirama as somewhat a little angry type.
Who does I refer to anyways in the story?

This is just what I think and they are only suggestions, you don't have to take them, but I don't exactly feel that Hashirama Senju is real enough.

Good job. If you read others, you'll see how you compare in the Naruto Fan Fiction.

Great job, I'm looking forward to reading more!