Oh my, where do I start. For one, Gray and Erza’s friendship is so sweet and touching and the conversations they have are so funny (they’re both so entertaining whenever they call each other lmao). I love how Gray can confide in Erza and how they’re not scared to share their secrets with each other. And oh my gosh, Gray’s dorky and lovesick side is so cute! Hearing him go on and on about Juvia like that is so adorable. Ofc gruvion had to be added in this story (how could it not?)! And I like how as much Lyon and Gray seem to hate each other, they still really care for and help each other whenever in need. But, as light-hearted this may be, it’s also really sad. Yet, I like both the fun side factor and the angsty side of the fanfiction. I feel so bad for Juvia because she’s just worried sick for Gray and I feel for Gray too because he just wants to tell Juvia he’s sorry and he wants to be with her and wants this to be over with (and also with the struggles of dealing with the fact he’s in love with her lol). I love how the earlier chapters, the cute little things they’d do together, are mentioned (like the baking- almost kiss moment) in the more recent chapters and what grabbed my attention is how you add little details from past moments to what’s currently happening (like how they mention how Juvia is so hard to wake up, yet gets up bright and early in the morning). I like how although Gray is starting to leave Juvia more, he still worries and freaks out over Juvia, clearly showing he cares so much for her. It’s just so nice and I just wish my babies could be happy (but I still love the angst lmao) ;(. I’ve always loved reading stories that portray what happened during the time they lived together and this was probably one of the best fanfics that has done that. Great writing great portrayal of characters and their emotions overall great ideas with what could’ve happened awesome fanfic.

Ok, I don't know you, nor If you are going to read this. Maybe you will think I am crazy or stupid. But you are so damn good. Please write a book. I would fucking buy it in two samples. Thank you for the story, it made me really happy. I wish you all the best.

HOW DARE YOU TAINT THE WHITE LILY OF JUVIA'S INNOCENCE.

THIS LINE KILLED ME

I've read this at least ten times and it still makes me laugh. Love it.

The ff was sooo good ! Im exited to read the next ! :-)

beautiful!I'll read the whole thing! You're amazing!

These were nice bunnies! Some that imo could just as well have happened in canon.
Also, every line Erza has said was perfect. Just gold.

that was reallt good! i hope you keep writing it!

Love this story, would be a amazing story in the anime/manga! would love this to happen :D

AWWWW I LOVED HOW GRAY AND LYON SPOKE TO EACHOTHER HERE! XD

Gray and Erza is my favorite sibling-like relationship between any characters I know. My favorite best friend relationship is Natsu and Gray and my otp is Gruvia. I also find is funny when Lyon and Gray argue, but not about Juvia, just as a sibling-like rivalry. XD So this was adorable and funny. I loved it.

Gray and Juvia are so perfect!

I love this little fic. It so cute and to see the side of Gray's feelings is so nice and sweet

Oh, hooray, you updated *happy dance* and it's so cute...you're just plain funny. I really really really really liked it.

Awww this was the best!
This story made me laugh countless of times, especially how you characterized Gray's annoyance with Lyon, so on point!
And I love how you managed to sneak in some Jerza action in a Gruvia story. Scandalous Erza is great :)
I ship Gray and Juvia so hard, they are absolutely perfect for each other, and you captured that magnificently in your story. Kudos to you!