Awshhh this is so cuteee

very cute I love it

hahahahaha

cute story!

Overall, it was nice and funny :D I like it.
Here's some criticism.
-Is it just me or the Anbu from Suna betraying does not make sense? Aren't they supposed to do whatever the Kazekage wants? And I think the only ones who are able to disagree with him are the councilors.
- In my opinion, Sasuke acts a bit out of character when he says "I'll buy it for you." He is quite famous for being monosyllabic and indifferent. So it seems weird if he says so to Sakura.
-Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't it "Great Fireball" instead of "Grand Fireball"?
Don't get discouraged :) If you keep working on your writing, you'll be better :D