This is probably the best thing I have read in well, literal years. There are a few errors with spelling, but nothing major. ( other than I only know english, but that's just due to me not learning another language.) Over all, it's great!

I wish I could answer to reviews in some public manner, but there's no such functionality, AFAIK, so I just made a thread on the hosted LGuP Forum for just that. I'm pretty sure links don't show up in reviews, so whoever is interested should check the link to the forum on my profile.

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... and you had your special OCs beat Maho/KMM in their second ever match. Oneshotting the Maus through its main armor belt (I call BS). Oh, and they're all dating St. Gloriana's hot chicks by Chapter 7. They have officially crossed the line into Gary Stu territory.

Also, Shiho didn't disinherit Miho. She was going to if Miho lost to Pravda or KMM, but Miho didn't lose. How can you have read deep enough into the lore to know obscure factoids like Assam liking to tell lame jokes, but not know something specifically stated in the anime?

I came back and read another couple of chapters.

- Still no sign of Rosehip among the St. Gloriana girls. Did Darjeeling stuff her in a closet? That would almost make sense because of how much of a black sheep she is compared to her classmates, but it's a huge missed opportunity for some much needed humor and drama that she would provide.

- After three chapters, your Special OC is passionately kissing Darjeeling. I've seen romances with less development and setup, but I really can't remember where. You say "It's been a month", but that's just it- you say it instead of showing it.

- In their first onscreen match, your Special OCs... humiliate Pravda, one of the top three tankwondo schools in Japan. It was bad enough that Ooarai won the tournament in the anime, solely because Miho was an absolute genius. But at least Miho had the excuse of being raised from the time she could walk to do this sport, then getting prior experience in the nationals in her time at Kuromorimine; plus she loses repeatedly against Darjeeling, keeping her from going over the line into a full blown Mary Sue. What do your OCs have? Tankwondo is traditionally girls only. How the hell are the guys who have never done this before suddenly so good at it?

I swear, if you have your Special OCs beat Maho/Kuromorimine...

sooo is the whole point of this story just to make up male counterparts for the various GuP girls in order to date them?

Just reminding you that Darjeeling does field cruiser tanks. You know, Rosehip and the squadron she commands?

To author:

This story is FANTASTIC, even if it is based right after the original series I’d don’t give bollocks, the plot is quite amazing, the battles are very detailed and adrenaline inducing and the romance is something to be rivalled with in this site ( though I did not read that many anyway) . I like the slight stereotypes and jokes that you put up in from time to time and last but most certainly not least , thank you for making this Fanon , as there aren’t that many stories compared to the amount in other fanfics e.g Ladybug and Come hatN or perhaps Game of thrones or Harry Potter but bloody hell this is Novel Quality stuff . Please make a sequel but I guess that it has been a year since this Fanon . Anyway I love this Fanon so, thank you.

Dahen.

Absolutely stunning. I read this over a few days, and I plan to re read it, but this is the best writing I’ve ever seen. You could right ten more books of this and I’d read it up. I hope you make more, but it seems you have stopped.

Rosehip is in the story, dear guest user, she just makes a late appearance.

I wish Rosehip was in the story. But oh well, sometimes you can't get what you want...

no one likes rosehip that's why :(

Nuclear Ghandi is best ghandi

Here we are again, my friend, to review this chapter. I love this bonus ones, they are lighter than others but still important for the "lore". I like the concept of Gloriana's succession (although, I think Pekoe was chosen because she knew all Darjeeling sayings), and I liked very much Peter's speech. Well, my compliments again for your work, and I hope to read a new chapter soon! Bye!

I remember reading this in this past but stopping for some now unrecallable reason. I'm happy I came back to give it a read again and catch up to the current end.
It's a well written story and it's nice to see one with guys that is complete and has hood characters. I've only found neither that interested me thusfar.
I notice some spelling mistakes here and there, but considering my own grammar issues it's not that bad.
A good story that I am curious about how you are seeming to continue.

Hi man! A bit late, because I haven't been in this site for a long, but at least I'm here to review this chapter! I'm honoured that you dedicated this chapter to me, even if only in part, and I'm glad my question was answered. In part. You decided to keep it misterious, eh? Well, a good choice, so now I can only guess the Savufovs are true Russians of the Motherland, да! Anyway, aside this, the chapter is fantastic as alaways and is understandable from a non Anglophone person. A good thing! Well, nothing more to say. Please forgive my errors, English is not my first language. Ah, I've followed your advice and I've decided to create an account. So if you want to chat (maybe about a season 2? Sorry, but it would be great to me!), now we can. Well, see you soon!

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