Reviews for Slaying by the Dozens |
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JustinOtherFictionFan chapter 6 . 7/22 You REALLY need to write the conclusion chapters for Milliana and Jenny. You have taken a long hiatus from writing but I really want to read more on several of your story lines. Following you just in case you come back to writing. |
JustinOtherFictionFan chapter 5 . 7/22 I found this chapter to be a bit disjointed. Actually, near the end there, when Kagura tells Milliana she's coming along, it teases at the possibility of a threesome. The lemons were juicy and the story line was interesting. |
JustinOtherFictionFan chapter 3 . 7/21 Dang, coitus interruptus. I would have gone mad. Excellent descriptions of Flare s anatomy :) |
Jpardo chapter 6 . 5/12 I hope you come back to finish this and your other stories. They’re great! |
Imperial-samaB chapter 6 . 3/30/2019 These are interesting not in a bad way but interesting |
Imperial-samaB chapter 5 . 3/30/2019 These chapters are good but it feels like you skipped like 20 steps |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/21/2018 You fucking cock blocking asshole |
Natsu chapter 6 . 6/15/2018 You just forget one extremely important event during the Tartaros Arc. And that is that ACNOLOGIA KILLED IGNEEL AND NOW I'M ALONE! |
experimenter19 chapter 5 . 6/6/2018 dann man that was good and my third favorite pairing for natsu |
Zack chapter 6 . 4/27/2018 I really want this to continue going, I really do! I really like this and it is so good! |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/3/2017 Do Hisui please do natsu x hisui |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/20/2017 Do kinana PLEASE DO NATSU X KINANA PLEASSSSSEEEEEEE |
KPfan83 chapter 5 . 8/24/2017 unlike the other chapters this one does not really explain how the two ended up in bed together. yes they went on a date but how does natsu go from a starving idiot to realizing theres something between him and kagura |
EliteOtaku111 chapter 6 . 4/29/2017 I truly enjoyed the story. The chapter about Ultear and Meredy was my favorite and I truly hope for more. |
WalkerFRD chapter 5 . 4/12/2017 Fic interessante. Mas houve alguns erros de continuidade, por exemplo. Os Destinos colocaram uma barreira que esconde Percy dos deuses e dos monstros, não faz sentido Grover e Chiron estarem atrás de Percy, eles só poderiam encontrar ele depois que a barreira caísse. E também, na praia você disse que Percy não tinha amigos enquanto conversa com os animais, logo depois você falou que o inútil do Grover era seu melhor amigo, embora esse foi um erro pequeno. De qualquer forma gostei muito da fic, estou aguardando a rewrite. Languaje: Português BR |