Please update. This story is really good and I really would like to see what happens.

You okay since you haven't written any new chapters?

Hey, one lost fighter! Loophole!

Great story! Love DJ! You clearly don't

That chapter was really good :)

Wow that was... crazy.
I did not expect DJ to be alive (although I probably should have), but I am glad that Rose did not become a killer :)
Artemis at the end seems a little random, as there was just a big action scene in the last chapter. If you are planning on making this really long, it probably wouldn't hurt to add in some chapters where they are not interacting with anything magical or mythological. Idk maybe they could have ended up wandering around in the woods for a while without aid and in a crisis? (sorry there is absolutly no reason to take my suggestions the way you are writting it is really amazing)

That was really good!
I just would have thought that Rose and James would have more difficulty fighting with weapons, and I thought they would all barely be alive because they were fighting with their emotions leading them and would therefore be sloppy... Idk it is awesome though

Right...

Your biggest sin so far. Is the Half-sibling of Percy. That is so over done and just annoying.

The next one would be the fact that PJO characters honestly feel like their book counterpart. Not even in the slightest.

COOL!

*gasps* OH MY GOD YOU DID NOT LEAVE OFF THERE TELL ME THERE IS MORE but that was seriously amazing and left me awestruck so please update ASAP because I need more!

Oi, what's your name, Cliffy McCliffinhanger?

I love your cliffhangers! I mean I also hate them but I cannot wait until your next update!

LLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOOOO!

I am so sorry I did not get around to reviewing your last chapter but
THAT WAS SO AMAZING AND I SWEAR THOSE CLIFFHANGERS MADE MY HEART STOP
I also felt that Leo's character was perfect and not ooc at all, and James acted just as I always imagined him acting
Please update soon I can't take the suspense!

That chapter was incredible! I really like how you described their fears in depth. I especially like how you showed the lengths Leo was willing to go to win in the end. Keep it up! You are really good at descriptive writing.