Not enough character building, relationship development or relevant details. This story could be awesome if it was rewritten with some sort of interesting plotline. Honestly the drama was childish and the extra characters seemed to be added while you wrote the chapters, almost on a whim. All in all, this story was very boring. I didnt feel like I could connect with the new characters or empathize with the new situations. Having Sam have a Male imprint alone could have been fleshed out for a few chapters, instead you introduced him and then dropped him with a 'we text and are friends now'. So lame and disappointing.

I hate that you use italics, bold and underlined text in this way. It makes the story look messy and hinders me from enjoying it properly.

This is a repost? How could it have things added, there is barely a story right now. So little detail or substance to the plot it may as well be an outline. Zero character depth or feelings to be found.

I never imagined it ending time this but that was awesome

Add more chapters please

I love it!

You really need a beta it's hard to read I would be happy to help

You need a beta

Love it can't wait for more

Thank you for sharing your awesome talent

Love it can't wait for more

Great gift for her to have

love it can't wait to read more and see what happens next

Hohoho!I'm really liking this story and this is so good section. I hope you update really soon. I can't wait to read update soon! ::)

Love it can't wait see what next