I dunno whether to laugh, be mad, or cry. I can't decide if this is a serious fic or a humor one. I know there's no humor on the genres but... duh guys, cookies anyone? And I still wanna know what happened to Blake AFTER she ate the cookies. With all those bloods and whatevers.

I guess it was somewhat interesting

I really enjoyed this story. It's well written and makes me incredibly interested in the circumstances behind Blake's "death" and the reactions the other members of team RWBY to Bake's situation - both disappearance and return. I hope you write a continuation of this.

But... but... but I wanna know why Blake left? Why'd she pretend? WHO ATE ALL THE COOKIES?!

This was fun. A cute, simple oneshot. It's nice to read those when going through stressful times like I am.

you should write more to this

I've been following hangovers and bubbled for awhile now, great story but this one also smacks of potential. Will you be doing anything with it or leave it a one-shot?

This a prologue it like a story. Please and thank you

Why would you do this? Jeez...rip apart team RWBY, dump Blake back into it to deal with a rage-induced Yang, crack a joke about cookies, then sort of reconcile it? There really should be a rule about putting the readers through such an emotional roller coaster in 1,150 words. Although if you are trying to set the standard for most emotion vs low word count, I'm pretty sure you win that award hands down.

The elephant in the room is never addressed (WHY did Blake do that?), rather this story focuses on the reunion of Blake and Yang, under very mysterious circumstances. Once again you write angst incredibly well; all of the emotional tones that exist to write into a story, and you love to pick that one XD I must now go read some fluff stories, to pick up the pieces of my psyche, thanks for that.

All in all, I say this story is the definition of a one shot. It seems to be a small scene that is part of a much larger picture (so many questions are left unanswered), but for what it is, it is really good. Looking forward to how you torture us in the next one, until then.

- Moongarm

This was so good! It was way off what I imagined when i submitted it but i love it more!

aww, thats it! darnit, the- eh whatever. that seems to darnit.

it was good, but i wish it had more explaining, like why blake died but its whatevs

The title and the mood are WAY different! I was not expecting feels.