Reviews for Insidious Attack
lilou chapter 2 . 5/10/2015
j'aimerai que cela finissent comme cela n'est pas le père de l'enfant de Marlo je le souhaite du fond du cœur mais pour le moment nous ne savons pas donc nous allons essayer d'être optimise est penser que le premier bébé de Sam soit fait avec Andy xoxo
jh126 chapter 2 . 5/8/2015
Geez, I sure hope the show has the same paternity outcome. Thank you for that! The idea of having to wait till the end of June for the show to start here is crazy. No fair. And I'm not holding out much hope for how this whole mess is gonna turn out.
Goggiebe chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
Wow I love this 2 one shot and wish it will play out like that the baby not Sam on show
Guest chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
Wonderful story! Please write more :) We are missing a lot of McSwarek stories! xx
Lilou chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
j'ai beaucoup aimée, j'aimerai a croire que dans les nouveaux épisodes de la saison 6 Marlo est menti et que le bébé n'est pas de Sam si bien sur elle est enceinte ? j'espère du fond du cœur que le bébé n'est pas de Sam autrement cela va m'arracher le cœur pour Andy honnêtement cela serait terrible pour la suite de la saison donc l'histoire que vous avez écrite me va très bien car pas de bébé marlo Sam, mais des bébés Andy Sam
c'était aussi beau quand elle pensée ne plus le revoir elle disait je t'aime Sam plus que tout au monde c'était absolument merveilleux et beau. J'aurai aimée que cela soit pareil dans le feuilleton mais bon c'est comme cela. Continuer a écrire c'est très bien bonne nuit XOXO
linda p chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
This was so awesome. I like your version better that the show.
jessym1988 chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
great Story great ending :-)
Guest chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
What a great story...I love how you write Sam and Andy...you know them as characters so well, which I love seeing in only this was the way it could and would play out in season six. I love how you highlighted the unbelievable timeline of this whole story that we will be forced to accept in season 6 and at least your story has a happy ending for Sam and Andy to not be connected to Marlo forever. As you say it would bring back such terrible memories for them..such a terrible decision. What is it they say a marriage changes nothing, while children change everything. But anyway thanks for a great thrilling McSwarek story with a little bit of fluff at the end. I really hope you continue to write so McSwarek stories as it may see some of us through season6. Once again thank you :))
Karin chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
Another great chapter and a great ending ! Thank you for sharing this story with us ... I've been missing some Sam and Andy stories !
kate1701 chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
Great chapter and really good story, the mercury poisoning must be awful to experience, what a nightmare. I have faith that Sam and Andy will be fine in season 6, even though we know it's Sam's baby, I have a feeling that she may not complete the pregnancy, i don't really know if that's how they will play it, and as awful as that is, i think it would be the best outcome for Sam because I don't think he would want a baby with Marlo. I know I read an interview were they said it would all be sorted out before the season was halfway, well you don't really sort out a baby do you, so that's what makes me think about miscarriage. Look forward to your next story.
Sam 'Dimples' Swarek chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
Excellent. If only that's how the baby thing could go. My gut feeling is Marlo dies or has the baby took off her and Sam asks Andy to raise it. I will hate it if that happens
evelinav chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
That was a fun read! MArlo concocting a sceme like that is almost as realistic as sam actually being the father of this child.. Biologically but hey since it's happening on the show... I love this. I enjoyed Andy making it clear to mArlo that she is insignificant when it comes to their love between sam and herself. I love that sam wastes no time making the same clear. Im all good with her being forever hospitalized. And you added a few cute lovey dovey stuff too.. I can always go for that.
Tiger chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
Loved this! Please write more McSwarek soon! You are a fantastic writer!
Fanfictionlover77 chapter 2 . 5/5/2015
Great story! Loved it!
mkwyatt chapter 2 . 5/5/2015
Love, loved, loved this story. To bad the writers of the show could not come up with as good way to undue what they had done! Good job.
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