This chapter is beautiful! I cried, the way you made Vader seem like a father was so touching.

it's 4am, Christmas, and I'm on my couch crying my eye balls out over a Star Wars fanfiction. LMAO —nervously laughing through the pain.

Wow somebody has a crush lol

Uh oh that doesn't sound too good I guess Darth Sidious going to have a chat with Lord Vader and his Apprentice

I sense that Obi-wan was her father

Wow that's was epic although not unexpected i hope that Lord Vader and Athrara will make Tarkin suffer greatly

Wow this is freaking awesome I love it I'm looking forward to seeing Athara meeting Luke

This is pretty good and it shows promise I'm looking forward to seeing the end

Once again a really good job. After every chapter I seem to wish you would go into more side quests in between the main story, but now here at the end I feel it worked out perfect. So well done!

Thank you.

I can't shake how much I love the phrasing of "her farmboy" every damn time I read it. Bless this entire story. Thank you for writing it. I loved every second.

I'm I'm I'm I don't even know but there's tears

SO MUCH SUSPENSE

I really love her sass

This is such a great read