I read this fic years ago and it has become one of those that I just think about from time to time before coming back and rereading. I love everything about it, from how you characterize May and how the story becomes more disjointed along with her thought process and it’s all just so good. You’ve written one of my all time favorite fics. Well done my guy

*whispers insidiously* Chapter Two...Chapter Two... Two...two...

I NEED A PART TWO. This is fantastic. I've read it like four times, all on different occasions.

Just to be clear, that was fanfiction girl I was trying to write not fabulous fiction girl. I normally would have left it but that autocorrect was just too wrong. Sorry.

I loved this story! It was pretty good and I loved the continuation of nicknames from Ultimatum. Is it in the same, well, Pokemon universe? Congrats on the amazing writing you're doing, although I must warn you against the dangers of becoming a "fabulous fiction girl". *shudders* But I'm sure you know all about them, this is the internet after all. Great fic, and I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Simple and sweet oneshot! May's personality is amusing, especially when she became loopy from the pain LOL. Though I do wonder, how did Brendan know she was in trouble? Hope to see more from you on Hoennshipping!

Loved this! It was very well written, and I thought you did a fantastic job conveying how confusing everything was to May towards the ending. It was perfect that something as simple as Brendan's scent pulled her out of the confusion, if only for a moment :)

I also liked how you portrayed May's team. There obviously wasn't much time to develop their characters or anything, but the group dynamic was done well. I thought it was so cute that she named her Metagross Steven xD

Thank you for feeding my hopeless Hoennshipping obsession! Hahah. Hope to see more from you in the future!