Reviews for Miss Potter
reptoholic chapter 1 . 12/3/2019
Interesting, hope she befirends the Biju and they are not sealed
bloodredmoon22 chapter 1 . 6/26/2019
Poor Madara
Bri chapter 1 . 4/15/2019
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
magicanimegurl chapter 1 . 3/2/2018
This was amusing and funny. How they went about getting together while building Konoha was sweet. The ending madr me laugh. Write on!
myafroatemydog chapter 1 . 1/1/2018
Pretty awesome srory
mckertis chapter 1 . 12/7/2017
Romance...right. Women behaving like that deserve to be forever alone.
The Ancient Phoenix chapter 1 . 12/5/2017
Brilliant...but Harriel is such a stupid name. Harriet. Or Hari. Jeez
sousie chapter 1 . 8/7/2017
hahaha did hariel go tailed beast on madara?
amazing story
thanzintay.2000 chapter 1 . 8/4/2017
I like this
Thornado chapter 1 . 7/6/2017
I love everything about this. I love the dynamic between Hariel and Hashirama. I love Madara. I cracked up that they had to hold hands. I love the forest of death. I love the creatures. I love that Madara ended up with Mito. I love everything gah! I wish there were more, I love it so much.
lunamoon531 chapter 1 . 3/15/2017
Omg, this was hilarious 3
laelruin chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
So cute! It was really entertaining!
Merry Christmas!
L
Jaricchi chapter 1 . 11/20/2016
I did. I really did enjoy it, but my question is...do they consider Hariel the tailed beast? XD That aside, it was a brilliant story! Thank you for sharing it. :) I enjoyed it very much.
amenoshimai1 chapter 1 . 9/24/2016
Oh... Oh my, poor madara
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
super xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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