First off I love your writing.

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"...see the two Alphas giving Bilbo adoring looks, the Carrier only stared back; completely and utterly clueless.

"You're adorable." Dwalin blurted out.

Bilbo squeaked, face turning red, going redder when Thorin nodded near vigorously in agreement."

- this would make the cutest chibi drawing ever!

This was so good! I loved all of this so much. You are a fantastic writer. Thank you for sharing!

You are terrible. Had me actually getting misty eyed reading this. Damnit stop writing so well; churn out garbage for ONCE in your life.

oh wow! im so sad that i finished this, i loved it! can't wait for a sequel :)

Love it!

Love your story

I'm happy that Bilbo has finally found his courage. I really enjoyed this story.

Thanks for the new chapter, and I was excited to read that there will be a part 2! I selfishly hope you get inspired for it soon :)

I like it a lot! **

Lovely story! I liked it without the ring and I loved how Thorin's concern for Bilbo was stronger than the gold sickness!
I need an epilogue! One with little dwobbits and something that fixes the Tradition in the Shire!

This was the best Omega Bilbo story I've ever read. I loved the how he finds his place in the world. It was perfect.

I love this story. The way Bilbo and the others charged into the battle and gave everyone renewed determination and will to continue to fight was the best. I am glad that Thorin,Fili, and Kili did not die. The ending was the best. I love how Bilbo finally learned to accept being an omega.

I loved this! I'm sad it is finished. Will there be a sequel? I love it how all the big strong alphas are scared of angry bilbo, so funny!

I love it
Thanks

Oh my the last three lines were beautiful and I got highly emotional with Thorin trying to comfort Bilbo even as he bled out. The imagery was stunning!