The best DZ fic, like an episode from the show with the SAME characters.
The show ended but you really could write more fanfic - that was great to read you. Thanks :)

Great story. :):):) It was just like an episode and I really enjoyed it.

I remember reading this story ages and ages ago before it was finished and really liking it. Recently I was regoing through some DZ stuff after rewatching the series. I'm so glad I found this story again and finished! Its such a wonderfully descriptive DZ fic. I love how the first vision Johnny gets is really his future and nothing to do with Jessica in that respect. The whole idea and story were very fascinating. I enjoyed the whole thing muchly. Thanks so much for writing and sharing this wonderful piece!

I just started watching Dead Zone two days ago and felt like doing some reading. Yours is the first substantial story I've read and I greatly enjoyed it. It was very well crafted, even if it's kept me up way to late. I always seem to start the good ones way to late at night :P

great job! Keep up the hard work :) Please write more DZ fan fiction :) you're very good :)

God and peace

Vanessa :)

I greatly enjoyed your story. You did the different characters very well. I was so glad that I started to read it once it was already completed because I don't think i could have bared the antisipation. Vey good story, well done on completing it.

I have no suggestions because...your story was very, very good! I was freaked out and hanging on the edge of my seat on chapter 13. LOL :)

Raven, I remember having started to read this story awhile ago, but it was not finished and I hated being left hanging. But, it was worth the wait! I liked the twists and turns of your mystery plot, but I also liked the characterizations of the well known people such as Johnny - but also the new characters in Bangor as well. I think your strongest point is the detail and description that you put into your writing. It pulls the reader right in to your story. It was a long time coming, but when the writer is as good as you are, you can't bang out something like that on your computer in a flash! You are a very gifted writer!

Wonderful job! I really enjoyed it! :~)

Loved the story! It would be a great eppy to see on tv too

GREAT JOB! This would've made an awesome episode.

_ October Sky

I loved that chapter! I thought it was so cool hw he saw his own vision and chased after someone else's.

_ October Sky

the best dead zone fic i have ever read thank you

o.O Interesting...

_ October Sky

Excellent writing and great stroy line! I felt like I was actually watching the show, very detailed and visual. Maybe you should submit it to the writers of the show, and maybe we can see it on TV. Keep writing!