| Reviews for The journey of the chosen one |
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   capnbooth4 chapter 4 . 1/8/2018 Misty, Giselle, Sabrina. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/17/2017 no |
| Dawn and Serena Ketchum Fan chapter 4 . 7/3/2016 As for Pikachu evolving, I vote yes to evolution eventually. I liked the interaction between Ash and Leaf. Keep up the good work. |
| sneak13579 chapter 4 . 9/21/2015 Harem: Sabrina, Daisy Oak, Erika, Giselle and if 6: Melody and Misty. Ash pikachu evolve into raichu. |
| Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 4 . 7/27/2015 great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. Pikachu Evolves: NO Ash's father falls in love with Delia: Yes The Girls: Lara & Melody |
| ExpertoftheBlade chapter 2 . 7/1/2015 Sabrina and Giselle |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/6/2015 Melody,Giselle, Lara, Erika, Elena, Sabrina,Leaf, Daisy Oak and Yes ash father fell in love with Delia |
| starlight luna chapter 4 . 6/6/2015 Hard to decide for Pikachu to evolve or not, well guess I'll pick for Pikachu to not evolve for now but maybe have Pikachu evolve in a different region. Girls to join Ash: Melody and Sabrina. Keep up the interesting and awesome story. Update as soon as you are able to. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/6/2015 Sabrina,Leaf,Melody, Elena,Daisy Oak,Sabrina,gissele for the girls , yes for Ash's dad to fall for Delia and yes for pikachu to evolve |
| Red Cheetah 93 chapter 4 . 6/5/2015 Yes! |
| StallionWolf chapter 4 . 6/5/2015 Yes to evolving (after getting as strong as possible as a pikachu). Also, it's Gary, not Gray |
| Tyrinor chapter 4 . 6/5/2015 Yes evoke pikachu but only after he learns all the speed moves and a decent amount of other moves besides electric. Still saying Sabrina from Saffron City, maybe Koga's daughter or niece can't remember her name. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/5/2015 Evolve pikachu for if he bounds with ash like in the anime he'll eventually fear that his current site should cause ash To switch him since he isn't one of his strongest like in ash's journey through Hoenn |
| Shadow chapter 4 . 6/5/2015 Great chapter. I think pikachu should evolve. |
| QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 4 . 6/5/2015 No, Pikachu will not evolve. I really think you need a Beta reader. |
