Reviews for His Little Princess |
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Casperace13 chapter 13 . 2/18/2018 What a great story. It was very well written. |
Vivstar chapter 13 . 3/9/2017 Oh. My. Gosh. I love it! It's so sweet and adorable. Well done. |
CharlieBoneFan chapter 13 . 2/24/2017 Great story! |
MangoSunbeams chapter 13 . 1/9/2017 AHHHH this was so good! It got lost in my slush pile, I can't belive it took me so long to read! Thanks again for writing, you ended it super good for all of us |
Polaris365 chapter 9 . 11/12/2016 I don't know if it's just me, but something is really off about the formatting in Chapter 9. Great story, though! |
Guest chapter 9 . 10/28/2016 Love the story but the text here is a bit funny. |
StarWarsSkyrim51 chapter 13 . 6/24/2016 I would love to see what will happen next. By the way it is a great story. |
Sissy Boo chapter 10 . 5/14/2016 Ooh, my heart is aching for Jareth. Can his Sarah pass the test, yes. But will she realize in the end what is waiting for her. I sure hope so. |
SugarPlum chapter 13 . 4/23/2016 This. This is what I come to fan fiction for. Your imagination with this movie/book was amazing and you took it to a different level where you put the pieces in the puzzle. This story feels more complete to me than the original story and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for having written it. |
Enchanted Peach Dreams chapter 13 . 4/2/2016 A very sweet story. |
DancingNinja21 chapter 13 . 4/1/2016 This story was fantastic, and I have such a bittersweet emotion tof see it end. You did wonderfully! Please write some more :) |
babyvfan chapter 13 . 3/31/2016 I'm both sad but happy. Sad because this story has come to an end since it was a joy to read and I always got happy whenever I got an alert that the story has been updated. Plus, it's always sad whenever a good story comes to an end. However I'm also happy because the story ended on a good note. Sarah won the Labyrinth and regained her memories. Also, I'm glad you started the last chapter after she won the Labyrinth. I wasn't sure whether or not you would were going to retell the entire journey of what she goes through. I think it was a clever move. Saves a lot of trouble, not to mention time. This story was a joy to read. You did an awesome job |
kapkeyknudols chapter 13 . 3/31/2016 Huhuhu! :'( I really hate when one of my fave story ends! But this is so good! I love it! |
Olivia chapter 13 . 3/31/2016 Finally! Yay! Loved it from start to finish. Well done :) |
RicherWorldBuilding chapter 13 . 3/31/2016 Awww Happy ending for all! Thank you very much for continuing this, it is a very good story, I enjoyed it very much. Final thoughts: Your ending was sweet, but very much abrupt, or maybe I'm just sad to see it end, and hadn't thought(hoped) you wouldn't end it just yet. Also, that line about forever being not long at all, might be slightly over used. Otherwise, I loved it, the Jareth Sarah relationship is a wonderfully sweet and genuine. It feels like a breath of fresh of air in a lust filled fandom, it is what makes this story wonderful. I hope you will keep writing wonderful stories, thank you again. |