I love to think that kaneki would be seriously fangirling over eto once the adrenaline wore off

Yikes. Good idea, but to many grammar mistakes for me to read. Also, are Kaniki and Hide supposed to be in there 30's or something? Because that would mean that the Quinx's ages wouldn't line up compared to the original story.

Hm, Urie is trying to get close to Noro or Tatara so he could eliminate them and get the credit to himself when he joins back up with the CCG and get a promotion with a powerful new quinque. Kaneki here is probably only doing this to protect everyone again and is going down a path like Tokyo Ghoul Root A. He may also be trying to save Yoshimura during his time here if he knows he is alive.

Note: Eto isn't the One Eyed King but was thought to be due to founding Aogiri. The real king at this point of time is Arima.

I think it would be better just editing the chapters in my opinion. It's easier that way.

I have no idea what's going on here. Have you started rewriting the story or have you decided to edit it. Have you decided to keep it on hiatus?

If you need a beta reader maybe I can help. But y'know I'm not that good myself so whatever you decide

Also just another thought if you want you can make kaneki go to another country ex. usa or england

So this is absolutely amazing plz continue

I can't believe that she hasn't found a Beta yet.
I would want to be one but my native language isn't even english
I hope she finds a beta in the upcoming chapters

Sup I'm still here. You can't get rid of me that easily :D Well- I'll have to go check out your new profile. Personally, I'd rewrite the story and post it on the new profile, but that's just me. I do hope to see you finish it, but I completely understand if you'd rather focus on something else right now. I hope you do well in art school! Those can be really tough, so good luck :D

Well for one thing it's spelled "college" not "collage"
That's an whole different thing . There were other mistakes but I can't remember them but this was always spelled wrong so you may want to fix it.
Love the story by the way. I see it's not complete and it's been some time since you updated so I'm just gonna read and hope you somehow update for some reason.
Please finish the story...

Excellent story, I love multi chapter stories. I do hope you decide to continue this at some point but if not,, Thank you for a wonderful read..

Oh joy, Eto's up to no good again~
Arthur, the Clowns have your research. You're never getting it back, brotha. You're lucky you have your quinque, though I suppose they'd have given it to you anyway because a Dove with no claws is no fun to play with.
Kaneki, what have you (not) learned about getting complacent?

Kiaaaa esto sepondra caliente jojoho

Well Kanae doesn't seem too happy about helping Kaneki. I wonder if she's planning to get rid of him? Kaneki finally gets to read Ukina's diary! I wonder what he'll do now? If he finds out about V then all of his current plans should change. I know he wants to escape Aogiri but if he ever plans to take on V he will need to get stronger than both Eto and Arima. The only way I see this happening is if he gets some really intense training and he cannibilizes on really strong ghouls. Even with that it'll take some time before he'll be able to surpass Eto let alone Arima. Unless Eto is willing to let Kaneki have a taste :)

Oh and Arthur is under house arrest? The CCG is really underestimating him. He'll probably escape when their attention is focused elsewhere. Anyways thanks for updating! Until next time!

Oh dear... Arthur is under arrest- although, what am I saying? Of course he'll get out of it. He'll probably escape just to hunt down Kaneki. As for Urie, he's gonna catch it when he returns with less frames. And Mado... Mado. Ahem.
Well, they're all gonna catch it in a few days when CCG raids Aogiri's new stronghold.
Marrying Hinami?! That's different XD