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I loved this! and that ending was gold

I have to emit, I normally don't like slash but this was actually quite adorable

A fatal verse is literally a verse from a chapter from a book in the bible. One verse. I hope this helps!

This story's awesome.
Loved overprotective!Yukio at the end there .
Aww~~~ its so cute

Great fic! I read it all in one go this was really great!

Still LOVING this story! Ah, Bon's apology really got me! And I love the action!

This was amazing! I really like how you wrote Rin's hurt, and his monologue is really great! People often forget that even when Rin's hurt he's like, scary strong. You really captured who Rin is and it was a real treat to read. I can't wait to read the next chptr!

THIS WAS JUST PERFECT OMG 3

OMG I loved it! I'm also super happy there are so few typos. Good job and keep being awesome! ;)

This was amazing! I absolutely loved it! RinBon is something beautiful!

Looooooved it! You did amazing with my idea and did it much better justice than I ever could. )

Apologies for not reviewing earlier but RL sucks complete ass. On the plus side, I might actually start writing again soon since I'm gonna have tons of free time. P I might run some stuff by you.

I loved the ending! Pissed off "older" brother Yukio is my favorite version of that character. Thanks again for taking my idea and running with it. Loved it, just in case you didn't already know. Lol.

That was a funny ending! Very much like the anime. Well done!
Write on:)

Me and my friends acted out this chapter and we almost died from laughing XD

Dammit Yukio you shouldn't have interrupted you overly cautions bastard jk XD. Even if Izumo didn't appear much just those simple scenes were enough to make me like her a lot. I really liked this story and I'm glad I got to see it all, I'll wait as long as it takes for some other possible story.