And she never came back

Please continue

I enjoyed the story, but the disappointment of it being abandoned spoilt that. You would be a very good writer if you didn't have so many problems with Gender (his, her) Plurals and tenses. You also seem to leave words out probably due to the excitement of the tale you are telling.

This is a great story but you had to bring violent Domination in and somewhat spoiled it. But still great if I skip over the distasteful parts. I don't like anal either.

You really do have a problem with 'his' & 'her', don't you? An entertaining story though.

I’ve always hated how when people bash Ron in fourth year, they conveniently forget that Hermione chose her crush, who was in the wrong, over Harry. Ron at least had the excuse of his jealousy overriding sense; Hermione could see very clearly who was in the wrong and STILL decided to side more with Ron.

She may not have abandoned Harry, but she stayed around Ron more and tried to get Harry to be the one to mend the bridge between them, instead of Ron. She also happily passed messages on for Ron, while going off at Harry for asking her to do the same for him. She may not have abandoned him, but she did pick a side and it wasn’t his.

0.0 uhhhhhhhhhhhhh why I really liked this it was good and now I need more of this story please pleeeeeeeasssssse

Y nunca volviste

good store

nice

Hope you keep writing. Thanks for the story it is rare to find a story like this that also has plot and I'm actually excited about how the duel and lordship stuff goes.

Pls update

this is such a ridiculous story bye

C’est dommage que tu n’écrit pas sur GOT tu aurai fait un malheur

Bizarre qu’il n’y est pas de chapitre sur Luna